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Springtime Haiku Trio
By Toad
11 February 2008
I've come to enjoy sequential Haiku

There is no soul mate

but endless sandy beaches

humble such desires.

 

The Buddha taught us

that desires create our pain.

Let them melt away.

 

All of the seasons

are a springtime. Look around-

what is born today?

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Written by ssandz (4 comments posted) 11th February 2008
I like these...deceptively simple :)

Written by Fledermaus (3246 comments posted) 12th February 2008
Very nice.

Written by Phil (6683 comments posted) 12th February 2008
Pleasantly done - but a little too spiritually simple for me. 
 
Phil

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