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Heh you
By Sweetheart
10 October 2005
Salvaging something from a great love.


Hey you! Come talk to me

You know I dont bite

You've held me in your arms before

Through daytime and the night

We've talked and laughed

been tender and kind

we know what goes on

in each others mind

I've know I've been harsh

to cover my pain

When all I wanted was you

to love me again

If it's not going to be

and it's all in the past

Lets be good friends

and make that bit last

Come talk to me still,

if it's really the end

Heh you.

My lover.  My friend.

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Hi sweetheart
Written by faye (9 comments posted) 24th October 2005
i enjoyed this alot its very heartfelt, ive had this pain also so i know your bearing you soul a little. 
 
faye  
 
 
:)

Written by Sweetheart (14 comments posted) 24th October 2005
Thank you Faye...Yes I was bearing my soul...why does what is so damned good, hurt so damned much at the end? x
love hurts
Written by faye (9 comments posted) 30th October 2005
thats the only explanation i have for the good feeling turning into bad...but i believe that if we follow our sprirtual path and trust in ourselves we will find the good stuff and it will stay good. 
 
You have a talent that can also be very therapeutic..! 
 
Keep up the heart felt 
 
Faye x

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