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Beverage out the Boy
By gutterkitty
13 February 2008
About trying to distract myself from my worries.

Drown the boy in coffee,
stick a biscuit in his mouth. Let questions crumb
and sweep away
on a tongue of river, a flush of sun.
You’re over the bridge,
sun’s lighting up your head, you’re over and loving
the dip of the river. There’s coffee
in your mouth and you flick
flick fingers over book spines,
cool and curving out to touch. Not the dip
the line of his back, warmth
electric sweet like mocha. Instead
press skin to flushed polysterene,
advertisements. Walk fast,
buy more, drink drink drink.
Drown the boy in river and sun
and the flush of light on hair. Stack his back
with books, stuff Suetonius
in his mouth. Sweep crumbs
from the bed, resist the dip and river
of sheets. Work faster, make money money
money. Drink drink
forget.

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Written by Veronica_Milvus (455 comments posted) 13th February 2008
There's a subset of the poets on GW who write what I call "emo angst" on the subject of lost love, and in free verse. This is what they should aiming for! Unlike most of them, you have some strong pictures going on here e.g. with the curve of his back and the flushed polystyrene contrasted. Also the river theme being echoed in the bed. The crumbs are good too. I can see a woman reluctantly getting out of bed, then walking to work or school with a starbucks cup in her hand, ending up in a library or a bookstore... 
 
all a lovely metaphor for shutting away your thoughts and getting on with life.

Written by fellpony (1507 comments posted) 13th February 2008
I really like this GK! Lots of metaphor, lots of strong images. Well worth a re-visit and a re-read ... I shall read this lots of times.

Written by francoise (129 comments posted) 13th February 2008
Alot of energy to this piece which I really liked. Its quite different to some of your other poems. 
:)

Written by gutterkitty (362 comments posted) 14th February 2008
Thanks guys :) good to know when an experiment works out. You've sussed it perfectly VM and it's a real relief to know that I got my message across. 
 
hey ro!
Written by no1butClo (337 comments posted) 17th February 2008
I loooove this. Not sure about emo-angst comments above though. 
 
It's dead sensual and the mix up of images nad feelings is really good to read. 
 
Hope all is well with uni. apps and everything 
 
clo x 
 
PS can't we stuff Cicero in his mouth? So much funnier... =P x

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