Ridiculously short little story, written especially for Valentine's Day.
RAWR. >D
“It was love at first sight” as the story begins; the perfect start to a fairytale relationship. Boy and girl meet, fall in love, go out for a date, kiss…and after quite a chain of censored material, get hitched and live happily ever after.
Perfect. Just perfect.
I hated Dean from the first moment I laid sight on him. He would slouch around in his black shroud, hair dripping like the darkest ink over his malevolent eyes. He’d never speak; just growl cruelly at those unfortunate enough to get in his way. He would have them all scurrying like frightened ants.
But not me.
His blood-red eyes would shoot straight into my soul yet I wouldn’t move a muscle - just stare straight back. His jaw would twitch, revealing shockingly pointed teeth; and that low growl would echo down the corridor towards me, born deep in his black throat.
When no one else was around, he’d take a spine-tingling step forward, unforgiving boot treading silently on the polished floor. Figure sharp yet hunched he’d creep closer; and still I would hold his evil gaze, gripping those cruel eyes with my own innocence.
Then he’d stop dead a metre or so away. I’d see his clenched fists twitching under their long sleeves. The fire would burn with new strength in his pale face, the light from his eyes like a bloody sword tearing into my very being.
And then, with a chilling, inaudible flurry of black, he’d pounce. His nails would dig into my flesh like snakebites; his poison coursing through me with every panicked heartbeat. His black ink would slowly cloak me, seep into my skin and begin to flow through my veins as his fangs sank deep into my full bottom lip. Blood would spill down my face as he attacked, but I would put up no struggle – instead forcing him even closer, fighting for breath as my whole body became numb in his vice-like grip.
Kissing a vampire isn’t easy. But who said love had to be perfect?
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Written by tat_2man (56 comments posted) 14th February 2008 |
Ah love is a beautiful thing. It might be short but it does get your point across. There is no perfect love. |
Written by Phil (6959 comments posted) 14th February 2008 |
As I was reading, I felt this was a little cliched - but I take it back. The last sentence rescues the piece. Liked it. Phil |
Loved It! Written by Aurora (67 comments posted) 15th February 2008 |
Hi, I just wanted to say that I have read _loads_ of vampire stories and I really felt the chill down my spine as I read your story, you should think about writing a vampire novel! I'd recommend reading the night world series by L.J.Smith The first book being "The Secret Vampire" these were the first Vampire books I read as a teenager and I learnt so much from them. keep on writing! I will follow your work with interest. Aurora |
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