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| A new life; Starting now - Act I | |
| By jjluver | ||||
| 14 February 2008 | ||||
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The curtain is drawn, and you see a classic family room with 3 people in it. A girl, a man, and a woman. The girl looks like she's in her late teens.. The man appears to be in his late fiftys, and the woman in her mid fiftys. It appears to be christmas. They're all laughing and having a good time. Narator - This is the Russle family. They're celebrating christmas, if you couldn't tell. Christina has always wanted to - oh wait, you don't know who Christina is yet, do you? I do apologize. This (As the narator says, 'this', a spotlight is shone down on the girl who is opening a present. She smiles and walks over and hugs her mom.) is Christina Russle. She's 17. As I was saying, Christina has always wanted to grow up, get married, and have children. She does have a boyfriend, and they do have plans to get married in a year, but that's not exactly what's going to happen. This is her story. The doorbell rings. Christina - I'll get it! Christina rushes over to the door, and opens it. There in the doorway stands a boy that appears to be about a year or two older than her. Christina throws herself at him and he wraps his arms around her and kisses her gently. David - Nice to see you too. Christina - Oh I'm sorry babe, I couldn't help it. I just missed you was all. David - Aw, I missed you too hun. Mom 1 - Why don't you two come sit down? There is after all gifts for David too. Christina smiles and hugs David again. They both walk over to the tree hand in hand, and sit down by the fireplace. Christina reaches under the tree and pulls out a gift. Christina - Here babe, this ones for you. David smiles and begins to carefully open the present. David - Oh wow, I didn't expect this much. Thanks baby. Christina- No problem. It was worth it, believe me. It was so worth it. David- I love you. Christina - I love you too. The curtains fall closed. And music plays while the scenery is changed.
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