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| Empty drip (katejayne) | |
| By katejayne | ||||||||
| 17 February 2008 | ||||||||
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I need a work on here for a start, so I decided upon a poem. Poetry isn't particularly an area where i exceed peers, yet I enjoy it. It doesn't make much sense, like most the poetry I tend to write. It's an expression of something I can't describe. The empty drip Silently echoed between the dun walls Its sound consuming all the air available. To follow, the sound of pattering feet eagerly forming on the dead wooden floor. An opened eye Mesmerised by the slivers of silver light trickling from the heavens and the sound of unseen angels Heart-broken thud as she realises... nothing but a faulty pipe.
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