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Paleo-Nihilism
By Fledermaus
18 February 2008
Sorry, couldn't resist. It was just such a great title had to parody it. ;)


Caveman see mammoth
Throw spear
Miss
Nothing in stomach

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Written by MariusBinx (17 comments posted) 18th February 2008
haha 
That's nice.  
A friend of mine wrote a somewhat antithesis to mine, I'm hoping he'll post it up. His wasn't a parody so much as an argument against my claims.  
 
I really like that the structure you used is similar to a chunk of mine. I just like the flow it causes which is why I often use it.

Written by francoise (129 comments posted) 18th February 2008
:grin This was a giggle. I think I should write something funny for a change. 

Written by Fledermaus (3487 comments posted) 18th February 2008
Thanks Marius and Francoise. 
 
If there's a 'neo-', there has to be a 'paleo-', 'proto-' and 'meso-', does there not? :P
HI Fledermaus
Written by jean.day (2366 comments posted) 18th February 2008
Nicely put few words. Poor caveman.

Written by Fledermaus (3487 comments posted) 19th February 2008
Thanks Jean :)

Written by coosh (923 comments posted) 19th February 2008
... and severe roasting from cave-wife when he arrive home empty-handed. Enjoyably succinct, Fledermaus.

Written by Fledermaus (3487 comments posted) 19th February 2008
Hi Roger. 
Luckily we don't live in that age anymore eh?

Written by Phil (6959 comments posted) 19th February 2008
Post Paleo-Nihilism 
 
Mammoth see caveman 
Not happy 
Mammoth charge 
Caveman crushed 
Stomach irrelevant 

Written by stevetroster (1599 comments posted) 19th February 2008
Loved it, Maus. Simple and to the point. 
:grin

Written by Fledermaus (3487 comments posted) 21st February 2008
Thanks Phil and Steve. 
Now that's really nihilistic Phil!
Redaction.
Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 22nd February 2008
No, no, no,Ol Mouse. Phil has it right. 
 
Mammouth see caveman. 
Embrace; 
Long lost friend. 
Eat tosser. 
 
No problem. 
 
In fact no problem at all! 
 
Burp...! 
 
Slan!

Written by Fledermaus (3487 comments posted) 22nd February 2008
Hi Gerard. 
That wouldn't be nihilism anymore, would it? Not sure if the cavemen prefers to be embraced by a mammoth though.

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