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Poetry
Rock
By JWallendas
19 February 2008
the twain shook
as i passed the field
no one looked to see where it lead
this was to be
could i not find within my mind
for it was always inside
chubba chubba
on and on
don't agree with its plea
run and run and run
to some god-forsaken trunk
blood on blood
now it sustains
growing growing
put it up to a safe grounding
to fall only for the misunderstood
watch
falling
like a rock

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Written by punchy (487 comments posted) 21st February 2008
Chubba chubba? 
I have know idea what this is about and looking at your other posts iIsuspect I am not meant to know what this is about. You are either on something, completely barmy or just simply having a laugh but don't stop cos I love the oddness of your poetry it makes me feel quite sane. 
Paula x ;)

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