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Poetry
Moving On
By NathanRoberts
20 February 2008
Another set of lyrics. 
A couple of people have requested a link to a mp3. If you so wish you can listen to/download the track here: http://bandmix.co.uk/indiefolk/

Yes,
I know I'd lose my mind
if I kept it all inside
but I didn't want to hear it said.

Now
I know I've missed the tide
and the ocean's out of sight
I've been sleeping on the riverbed.

(chorus)
All time since then
Has been totally paralysed
I've tried to pretend
I'm moving on
 -
We're revealing in our ways
to people who can stay
the course, but most just fall away

Like a captive with a prize
the ego's justified
but it won't help me get away

All time since then
Has been totally paralysed
I've tried to pretend
I'm moving on

 (bridge/coda)
I led you on
I just don't know anything
The future's gone but I'm...
Moving on


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Written by Phil (6683 comments posted) 20th February 2008
My favourite of the three songs listed on the web page link. Really liked it. You can't beat a bit of acoustic guitar and harmonica. Words on the page can seem a little flat - but come to life with the music. 
 
Keep them coming. You'll have to upload a few more MP3s though. 
 
Phil

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