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| Sunrise, Bollin Valley | |
| By Koobla | ||||||
| 24 February 2008 | ||||||
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Sunrise, Bollin Valley I am in Bollin Valley feeling, like my surroundings, sleepy and damp! I came here as a kid, my memories are made of this; Alive to detail now my life has accrued its own. And this eerie light is amassing and flattening itself, As I do, along an earthly line on mid-distant wood Its central expanding point spreads recognition Outwards, suddenly snapping on like one of those new energy savings bulbs And the whiteish noise greets the pure-whitening light With detailed harmonies of individual birds realising They are no longer brotherhood, but me! me! me! And soon fingers of soft Bollin water align with the glow To join airy friends practising scales on dark And light tinkling peaks of shushhhinggg water Wake up burdened grass that tickles my nose – As it shakes green pacamacs free Of glassbead dew - and blades spring at my eye in relief and release, Jerking my head to complete God’s domino effect,, ha! ha! ha! Alive and awake now, but all in a dream.
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