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Poetry
something silly to do with chickens
By emma777
25 February 2008
just a silly rhyme

once i was was a trim wee fowl
rippling ma pecs
struttin wi the chicks i'd scowl
thinking i was best
but now i hide my swollen gut
pecking at ma ripples
watchin farmer pinch ma butt
with daily grins n dribbles

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Written by NathanRoberts (277 comments posted) 25th February 2008
Obviously a sequel to 'A Surface Wound' then ;)  
Well, it did the trick for me...made me smile.

Written by Phil (6959 comments posted) 25th February 2008
Now this is what the poetry forum needs once in a while. Amongst the debris of angst ridden lives and high-brow versing, a little wit.  
 
Thoroughly enjoyed. 
 
Phil

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