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| Her Last Wish | |
| By bloodange77 | ||||||
| 26 February 2008 | ||||||
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Ha, Ha death.
"Help!" she cries on the inside. Inside she was screwed, on the outside she looked fine. Inside her mind, her screams echoed. "Someone help me before it's too late!" she cries.
She knows no one can help her. She has to try. Try and shout loud enough to be heard. There was only one problem, she only screams in her head. Like never before, she screams as loud as she can in her mind. Louder than her conscious could. All alone, she's all alone in this world. No one knows her, no one cares. But someone has to care. At least someone. But in her mind not a soul cares for a troubled girl. Finally, her sobs break loose, wracking her entire body. She's shaking harder than ever before. Each slice a bit deeper and trembling. Each sob quivers. She screams outloud now, but it's too late. She's all alone now. All alone in a big empty house. She's bleeding pretty bad now, almost all her blood lies in a pool beneath her fingertips. Yet she keeps slicing. As deep and long as she wants. She knows if she doesn't stop she'll bleed to death. But she doesn't care, the blood is comfort to her. Her mind begins to ease, it's screaming. Her slicing continues though. Someone had finally cracked her mind. She starts losing all feeling of her body. She can't tell if she's still slicing anymore. Can't tell if she's even holding the glass. Can't think or even move. Her vision blurs, everything becoming one. Darkening into one solid color. Black. She hears her bedroom door open and focuses on it. Her vision clearing for a moment, enough to give her a glance. She thinks she sees her mother, but it's not her mother. It was Death, come to collect her. She realizes now that she is dying. "Wait," she whispers," I need to tell my mother." "It's too late," Death says coldly. "Please," she begs.
He seems to be amused, and lets her have her way. It's a short, simple, and sweet good-bye.
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