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Poetry
Fables #1
By psukhe
26 February 2008
I don't know if I'd call this poetry but I do think of it as poetic so for fables of this length and style I thought it more appropriate to publish them here than in the short stories section. I aim to write one of these each day, and all pertain to a belief or moral I uphold. There are plenty more to share if people enjoy these.

The Beaver and the Birds

 

A BEAVER refused to build a lodge, afraid to fell nearby trees lest there be Birds nested in them.

The Birds were grateful and hatched many times their usual young.

At last, however, winter arrived and food became scarce.

Without enough rations, all the chicks starved.

Unable to shelter from the cold, the Beaver also froze.


The Peacock and the Pigeon

 

A PEACOCK captivated by his own beauty defied any creature to best his display.

None could match the bird’s majestic plumes.

At last, however, a Pigeon challenged the Peacock.

They were to compete for the honour of most beautiful bird, judged by all who witnessed.

The Peacock accepted, and many animals gathered in curiosity.

So rapt was the Peacock in their attention that he failed to see the Fox until it felled him entirely.

Dragging his quarry, the Fox thanked the Pigeon for leading him to such a prize and promised to spare the Pigeon forevermore.


The Capitalist

 

A CAPITALIST was warned of a great flood that would engulf all the land and set about commissioning a ship.

The vessel was built to accommodate any resident that could afford the price of salvation.

Fear rained down upon the city as people fought their way aboard, and the Capitalist found that he was stranded without money or refuge.

Lamenting his investment, he sheltered on higher ground.

However, the waters fell sooner than expected and the townspeople were spared.

Only those aboard the ship were lost – swept out to sea without captain or crew.


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Fables
Written by Koobla (8 comments posted) 27th February 2008
Some accute observations here and the language chosen is fairly musical, and leans towards poetry - why not go the extra yard?

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