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Slaves of History
By Koobla
26 February 2008
This was written for a competition to reflect on the Slave Trade and it's connections with Manchester and the cotton industry.  I was trying to say that the court's out still, and that slavery changes but doesn't disappear, and that there's no escape for anyone...


Slaves of History

 

Modern media helps us empathise

With the human cargo sacrificed then

Free people broken by their own and ours

Commodoties, things for profit and pleasure

Of gentlemen, and their blind supporters

Empathy an inbound not outbound act

 

So what do we think now, Mancunians? 

Gazing at our new Manhattan skyline.

The flimsy foundation of lost empire

Tangled deeper than it’s cotton-plant roots

What do we tell the children, awestruck

By the flash new front at the old Exchange

 

Do we tell them that no good production

Comes from old murky morality

Or shall we say that nature finds her way

To take revenge on those sinning sailors

By making their kith and kin squirm

In the best seats, hides tanned by the elders

 

Maybe, we hope, future  sons and daughters

May sail safe seas, blown by wiser winds

With brothers, sisters, woven together

Bearing no malice in their afterthought

Forgiving but never quite forgetting.

All slaves of mutual history now

 

The price of many things has varied since.

But fetid hot air uncleansed by salt sea whip

Remains abundant, unvoiceable, quiet.

Lashed and bound together, white and black

Mates and masters, indistinguishable,

Their newer vessels on the same old tack

 

An image of brotherhood now prevails

Just as skin deep in this life as that

Except we all chant spirituals now

All those with the wherewithal that is

But King Martin’s dream is still a dream

Torture for all who are and see below decks

 

And these warehouses blasted pristine clean

What shall they stand for?

Now that the relative wealth of chained states

Regurgitates those dark satanic ills

Shall they stand, head bowed, to whitewashed hands

Or fly a flag of purgeing dignity

Reviews

Written by Fledermaus (3487 comments posted) 26th February 2008
A most interesting piece, not least because of its subject. The trans-Atlantic slave trade was of course a disgusting thing, but it's also so much more than just rich white men abusing poor black men.  
 
First of all there are the Maroons, whose history deserves a lot more attention than it ever got: They came as slaves, but settled the new world in a totally different way than the whites, and some West African customs are better preserved in the jungles of Latin America than those of Africa. Their story is absolutely fascinating. 
Then there are the different relationships with the native Americans, as some tribes offered escaped slaves protection (like the Seminoles, which eventually even became a mixed tribe), while others were themselves slave owners.  
Add to that the existence of slavery all around the world at that time AND the fact that many white Americans descent from people who were hardly more than slaves in their homelands (especially the Irish and the Russians) and there emerges a strange and colourful picture. 
 
Indeed: Forgive, but never forget... 
 
I liked especially those parts of your poem which mention 'all slaves' and the indistinguishable masters and slaves, as the 'Modern media' you mentioned all to easily make it a (literally) black-and-white problem, while it goes so much deeper...
hi mate
Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 26th February 2008
The Biggest Slaves in Manchester Mate were the Irish, Welsh and English Working Class. 
 
You Know Manchester Mate?? 
 
Near the Mancunian Way Roundabout, Near Hulme Church , now converted into flats, that roundabout is sacred ground, the burial site of thousands of English, 
Irish and Welsh folk who died in a Chorea Epidemic. 
 
I Conrats You on this fine piece of writing and having the courage to say that slavery was not just one colour or race, I also support all you say that we who are Mancs should at least attempt to educate our children on the history of our great city, be that history good or bad.
Thanks...
Written by Koobla (8 comments posted) 27th February 2008
Thanks both for your info and comments. I always think my stuff isn't direct enough but I must be gettin a bit clearer as you have picked up the big points. 
 
too true, maipenrai - I've got a census return from Ancoats showing a one up one down with 8 of my Irish ancestors in it - three generations from great great grandad and grandma to my grandma who was three, my great grandad was listed as a 'cotton scavenger'. 
 
All those areas now are flash flats with security gates, etc... I'm glad the council's made this effort to record it all to make sure noone forgets who 'paid' to build this great place... 
 
cheers 
:)

Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 27th February 2008
with you all the way on that one, my family tree also starts in Ireland, Cork/Dublin area's as far as I can see, lots and lots of people of Irish desent in manchester.

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