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| Black Shrouded Pavillion | |
| By Matthiasrising | ||
| 27 February 2008 | ||
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I was looking through my really old stuff, and found this. It's sickly dark, a bit over done, but for the time, a pretty good work by me. Tell me what you think. I. Summer’s last cry bleeds into the placid air, Its sober resolve of coming repose Leaving chilling fibers of frigid gust about its roamings A cloud cast sky rolls over the clearing above, Steals but a glance about the cote, Sudden rain mourns the cold heart in its damp center A lonely glossy drop falls down the window, Purged from its wet pooled slumber, Slides down the dusty pane into the moldy sill below Black whispers crawl out beyond the frame, Drawing out long, cold webs of silk Extending tracing nets around and along the corners Rotten must permeates from each dark crack Summoning memories of the losses Deserted within the abysmal gorge of nature’s process The black dyed timbers converging roughly Stand above ground by shear will Of the great secrets held within the icy wooden tomb The door, long ago decomposed into the frame, Now hardly allows the slightest stir; Putrid fungal mass set guarding the gates of purgatory The dirty, slanted step up to the door greeting Before attempted entrance into hell, The knob, protruding violently from the rot, spills out Blackness exhales from the blind bowels within, Accompanying whistle spurts forth, Breath of things dying penetrates hope in light outside Retched muck meets the hand driven in the hole, A final attempt extricates the heap, Now fragmented, the door’s absence releases the beast II. The grim midst of silence steals mortal vision, Rendering the invader wholly blind, The eyes purged from their sockets in wisps of ebon Desperate hands searching for something to grasp Longing even for the wintry cold, The knife’s caress, a drop of acid, lick of a sharp flame Eternal night grips as amber, the doomed insect, Entombing the soul in velvet black Dead ice of empty dankness, colder than Pluto’s core Still dusk within solemn sarcophagus of winter, Sucking even the light from outside The shattered door replaced with the rapacious abyss A last surge of half-snuffed energy reveals a snag The body plummets to cold planking Hands frenetically flying about in final raid for escape The latch’s door catch struck the finger on the tip Frigid wet bleeding in sharp crevices, About the trap door so juxtaposed within frozen floor Shaken scent from depths of the passage released, Up through broken crease of lost gate Death shudders from below through the pried open door Decrepit ladder descending into the bowels of hell The black earth crumbling away, aft Tracing splintered, pegged, wooden shaft into darkness Unleveled dirt landing in absolute still blackness Greets cold feet with surprising glow Warm currents circulating about the vacant cavern ahead Mystic warmth guiding into the desolate obscurity Shuffling dirt path into lost eternity Felt welcoming, dry bones for companions in the dark III. Lost hope inside channels leading to forever Lost memory locked in dark abandoned chamber Lost soul in quiescent abyssal cataplexy Lost words in the stolen breath of depravity
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