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By Brett
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27 February 2008 |
What introduction is needed for either drunk or haiku? The Drunkard's Haiku
My affinity
Is with the rain; it pours, falls,
Calms. Then pours again. |
Written by NathanRoberts (277 comments posted) 27th February 2008 | I like this one...honestly! It helps that, unlike a couple of your previous offerings I sort of understand the form that you're using........plus I'm a pisshead.
Haiku, natural
Blend. Mix originality
with tradition. Cheers!
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Written by Fledermaus (3280 comments posted) 27th February 2008 | | Haiku's are great. Short, clear, to the point. Liked it. |
Written by Veronica_Milvus (626 comments posted) 27th February 2008 | There is a slightly alcoholic theme emerging in Brett's ouevre (sp). But this particular one is a very apt analogy.
Cheers! | Only slightly, V ?
Written by Brett (781 comments posted) 27th February 2008 | Thank you, Veronica, they do say write about what you know. I do intend to submit something outside of my naive gin soaked style, I'm just trying to find my feet - literally and metaphorically if you see what I mean.
You have been very supportive to such a new member and I appreciate all your comments.
Bless you V.
Brett | :-)
Written by emma777 (21 comments posted) 27th February 2008 | | i am not a fan of haikus generally but yes i like it! it's a nice observation and made me smile. | Aah.
Written by Brett (781 comments posted) 27th February 2008 | | Aah. Emma.
Written by Brett (781 comments posted) 27th February 2008 | That's very sweet of you.
Kind regards
Brett |
Written by Phil (6713 comments posted) 27th February 2008 | Enjoyed it too.The first (I think) Haiku to make me smile.
Phil | Very warming...
Written by Brett (781 comments posted) 4th March 2008 | ...in these days of negative booze stories to find that this made so many people smile. If inspiration from my cerebrally inflamed states can cause a smile then my drinking will not be in vain.
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