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As mass approaches zero, potential energy approaches infinity; quantum limits and my love
By Matthiasrising
02 March 2008

This is in response to Veronica_Milvus' challenge. It's not in any specific form. But it utilizes rhyme and syllable number.

Also an old one. But these things are timeless. Poems, that is. How can you tell when I wrote something?

I like how it seems to say something important, then drops off. Taunting?


Embarking on high frequencies

Flowing through the delicate matrix

Sifting through passing fantasies

Seeking common ground with written word

 

Mastering physics and the pen

I speak the language of the poet

In and out of this page, woven,

Ev’r deepening lines of tragic truths

 

The simplest feelings are the most,

Abstract to express in common tongue

Cursing with ink, the wretchèd ghost

Baring the cold crypt to corroding air

 

Breath escapes; tossing in the night

Awoken in endless fantasy

Now the author tells of his plight

Deep within the struggle of his lust

 

The insides tear themselves apart

Debating the choices life turns up

Bleeding perplexion from the heart

Gripping the soul from two directions

 

Emotions can be described by,

Complex mathematical limits

And by the definition, I

Am haunted by parallels I find

 

The ability to express,

Quickly approaches nonexistence

As the words writ’ seem to digress

And potentiality advances

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