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| As I lie on the Street | |
| By sarahh | ||||
| 03 March 2008 | ||||
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Inside the brain of the people we ignore on the streets. Crackling music rings through my ears, and the blistering heat tans more then my skin. All alone, sitting on the curb waiting for sympathy to walk down the street where I lay. I feel sick and hopeless, I am waiting for Christ to take me away, reviewing my life past, I will not see his comforting faith. Reviewing my past I will not feel his warming embrace. This blistering heat is my fate, if I were so fortunate. My black finger tips and polluted face, my tangled hair, my regretful eyes, my bitter mind that can not think without a hint of eccentric. A collection of calamity that would seem discreet then, should grow like ivy upon my weathered home until the day turns into darkness, and I can not escape, I can not change. Family that once tried to establish my life, they gave into the skepticism and regret that the devil that exists inside of me lead them to belief. The demon won't set me free no matter how much I cry, regardless of how much I pray. They will not leave, not for a second. Please someone help me. Do not let me down. Despite of everything wrong, I still believe I can be saved. Even with all my mistakes, and my awful habits I can still be beautiful.
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