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Poetry
An Enigma
By audrie
04 March 2008
Just wondering at life's oddities!

When a woman wears bow-tie and tuxedo
To go out for a for a night on the town,
She is thought of as terribly trendy.

 Now, doesn't it perplex you all,

That when a man wears high heels
And a long evening gown,
He is thought of as a transexual!


Strange old world!

Reviews

Written by stevetroster (1588 comments posted) 4th March 2008
"When a man wears high heels and a long evening gown, 
he is thought of as a transexual!" 
 
Damn! Now what am I going to wear to the party? 
 
:grin

Written by audrie (454 comments posted) 4th March 2008
How about a tutu and pumps?

Written by stevetroster (1588 comments posted) 4th March 2008
Damn!!! 
 
I gave my pumps to a charity shop!!!!!

Written by NathanRoberts (277 comments posted) 5th March 2008
A woman in trousers and tie 
is considered to be alright 
but a guy in a skirt 
and a blouse (not a shirt) 
is labelled a 'transvestite'. 
 
 
Not as good as rhyming 'transexual' with 'perplex you all' 
I must admit.

Written by Fledermaus (3448 comments posted) 5th March 2008
Trendy? I suppose it's women that decide on what's trendy, for I find it rather un-attractive when a woman wears such clothes. Besides, did Marlene Dietrich not already do it more than 60 years ago? 
 
I like to think I'm rather open minded, but men and women do have different shapes and hence some things are not exactly figure-flattering when worn by the opposite sex ;)

Written by audrie (454 comments posted) 5th March 2008
Steve, glad to know you still have the tutu! 
 
Nathan, I prefer my version, but yours is very good. 
 
Are you querying my use of the word, transexual? I did wonder, myself, as transexuals feel they are in the wrong body and transvestites like to wear the opposite sex's clothes.  
Your choice of word would fit better, but I assumed that if they feel in the wrong body, they would also like to wear the opposite sex's clothes. 
 
I just think it so unfair that men should be spitefully penalised for doing something that women are praised for, and get away with.
Hi, Fledermaus,
Written by audrie (454 comments posted) 5th March 2008
I'll try again!
Written by audrie (454 comments posted) 5th March 2008
My touch pad is going manic! 
 
Different shapes we are meant to be but with the size zero models you can't tell the boys from the girls!
tutu
Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 5th March 2008
I wore a tutu once, a pink one and I had a wand!!!

Written by audrie (454 comments posted) 5th March 2008
Hi maipenrai, 
 
You and Steve should get together and present a show, 
you could call it 'Bally Marvellous!'

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3445 comments posted) 5th March 2008
Firstly congratuations on that convoluted rhyme, it was a tour de force. Are a fan of the great Tom Lehrer by any chance? 
I understand what you are saying but some women can carry off that look and look quite stylish but I have yet to see any man that can look anything but ungainly and awkard in high heels and a dress. It's just a question of style 
cheers 
Jane 
I go for comfort nowadays
Written by Josie (2825 comments posted) 5th March 2008
 
I’ve never had the inner urge 
To wear a smart tuxedo. 
I feel it would annihiliate 
My feminine libido. 
 
High heeled shoes and evening gown – 
Went our with the slim waist 
Trousers and tops are comfortable 
And much more to my taste. 
 
 
Good subject Audrie 
 
dress
Written by mia_ms_kim (1054 comments posted) 5th March 2008
A former transsexual/transvestite man, who later abandoned the life style, said of high heels, 'BURN THEM!' He had even less regard for nylon stockings. I think he found out how much women sometimes endured to look good. I also once knew a gay woman who came to a company social event with her partner, both of them dressed in tux and bow-tie. That association stuck in my mind. 
Mia
Thanks all,
Written by audrie (454 comments posted) 6th March 2008
Jane, I'm ashamed to say I have never heard of 
Tom Lehrer. I'll have to look him up. Agree with you that a stick-thin girl can look smart in a tux, but then she is built like a youth anyway. I think it's the broad shoulders and legs and feet that spoil it for men! 
Have to admit I was rather pleased with the rhyming, which is why I didn't use 'tranvestite'. 
 
Josie, Have to agree with you on the choice of clothing! 
 
Mia, I'm sure he was right, but we all go for the high heels when we are young.

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