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| By Avril | ||||||||||||
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This was orginally meant to be lyrics, but obviously there's no place for lyrics on GW. I just discovered this and a few other pieces amongst the piles of junk in my desk, I think I wrote it a year ago. Shadows shift closer as this comes to its bitter end Your perfect face calms me, Hear what I'm trying to say! You renew my broken soul I mournfully watch you walk away. But I will hold my head high, Erect and emotionless My dreams hold you with loving arms But you're gone You won't speak when I call You don't hear when I fall To think I loved you is insanity! Still my dreams caress your faultless countenance I will not forget, I reach for you but you can't feel me You try to undo my sinful self Now there's danger, you flee.
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