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| With You, Without You | |
| By Bagheera | ||||||||||||||||
| 10 March 2008 | ||||||||||||||||
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This bit of a "♪♪ Somebody done somebody wrong song♪♪" in typical Country & Western tradition snuck up behind me when I wasn't looking and insisted I write it down .......... can't get the melody out of my head, so I'll have to lay THAT ghost by fingering a few chords until I get it down on paper ......... With You, Without You
And you won't see me crying as I watch you walk away And leave me ……… though you know it grieves me After all this time …………………. I wish I knew what I've done wrong: when did our love die? How can I restore the flame? Would you even try---- Darlin' are you listening? …….. or am I just whistling…….. In the wind? --------
Chorus You say you can't live with me, but I can't live without you You say you need to find yourself, I've found I'm nothing without you You say your love's grown cold: I say I'll just grow old I'll always be in love with you, without you
Or how I felt my heart would melt when I first held your hand I felt so fine --- to know you were mine And I was yours Now you find you've changed your mind, we're strangers once again You say we're through, but I'm telling you, my heart will still remain Forever true -------- to only you For ever more
Chorus You say you can't live with me, but I can't live without you You say you need to find yourself, I've found I'm nothing without you You say your love's grown cold: I say I'll just grow old I'll always be in love with you, without you
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