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Charles Dickens view of the US - The Red Devils - Chapter 25
By jean.day
11 March 2008

 March 15th

True to her word, Libbie sent me extracts from several of her husband’s letters, but with them, just a very brief accompanying note. “Dear Miss Kellogg, These letters tell about the last weeks of my husband’s life, but as he shared the weather and the hardships with your father, I thought you might like to know about them. LBC.”

I decided that for the end section of my essay, I would intersperse my father’s dispatches with the letters from General Custer.

Miss Marble announced that those who had not yet done a class presentation showing the progress of their essays would be expected to be ready today. Obviously in an hour lesson not everyone can be called upon, so I rather hoped I would not be. We had had presentations by Josephine on Sacagawea, from Albertina about Harriet Beecher Stowe, and from Cora Sue.

When the time came, I was lucky, as Miss Marble decided it was time for a boy to take the stage. Thomas had to tell us what he knew about Charles Dickens.

He started out by saying that he wanted to do a different picture of Charles Dickens from the one that was normally known by people who read his books. So he wanted to give Charles Dickens, as seen from America and as he saw Americans.

On January 3, 1842, Charles Dickens, when he was just about 30, sailed from Liverpool on the steamship Britannia bound for America. Dickens was at the height of his popularity on both sides of the Atlantic and, securing a year off from writing, determined to visit America to see for himself this haven for the oppressed which had supposedly righted all the wrongs of the Old World.

The voyage out, accompanied by his wife, Kate, and her maid, Anne Brown, proved to be one of the stormiest in years and his cabin aboard the Britannia proved to be so small that Dickens quipped that their portmanteaux could "no more be got in at the door, not to say stowed away, than a giraffe could be forced into a flowerpot".

Here is what he writes about trying to administer brandy to his wife and her maid to calm their nerves due to the violent seas on the journey.

"They, and the handmaid before mentioned, being in such ecstasies of fear that I scarcely knew what to do with them, I naturally bethought myself of some restorative or comfortable cordial; and nothing better occurring to me, at the moment, than hot brandy-and-water, I procured a tumblerful without delay. It being impossible to stand or sit without holding on, they were all heaped together in one corner of a long sofa -- a fixture, extending entirely across the cabin -- where they clung to each other in momentary expectation of being drowned.

"When I approached this place with my specific, and was about to administer it, with many consolatory expressions, to the nearest sufferer, what was my dismay to see them all roll slowly down to the other end! And when I staggered to that end, and held out the glass once more, how immensely baffled were my good intentions by the ship giving another lurch, and their all rolling back again! I suppose I dodged them up and down this sofa for at least a quarter of an hour, without reaching them once; and, by the time I did catch them, the brandy-and-water was diminished, by constant spilling, to a tea-spoonful."

Here is what one newspaper has to say about his visit to their town.

Worchester Egis (Massachusetts)
February 5, 1842

A reporter for the Worchester Egis met Dickens at a reception at the Governor's mansion and logged this detailed description of Dickens:

We found a middle-sized person in a brown frock coat, a red figured vest, somewhat of the flash order, and a fancy scarf cravat, that concealed the collar and was fastened to the bosom in rather voluptuous folds by a double pin and chain. His proportions were well-rounded, and filled the dress suit he wore.

We will close this off-hand description without going more minutely into the anatomy of Mr. Dickens, by saying that he wears a gold watch guard over his vest, and a shaggy greatcoat of bear or buffalo skin that would excite the admiration of a Kentucky huntsman.

We believe that it is well understood that he draws his characters and incidents less from imagination than upon observation. His writing bears slight evidence of reading, and he seldom if ever quotes from books. His wonderful perceptions, his acute sensibility, and his graphic fancy, furnish the means by which his fame has been created.

The early maturity of his genius and reputation have but few parallels. May he long live to edify and amuse the world, and to receive the reward of praise and emolument which is his just due.

In keeping with Dickens fascination for the unusual, visits to prisons, hospitals for the insane, reform schools, and schools for blind, deaf, and dumb children were high on his list of places to visit in almost every city he toured.

He also toured factories, the industrial mills of Lowell, Massachusetts, a Shaker village in New York, and a prairie in Illinois. While in Washington he attended sessions of Congress, toured the White House, and met President Tyler.

In the White House, as just about everywhere he went in America, Dickens was appalled at the American male passion for chewing tobacco. He gives this account of a visit to the Capital building:

"Both Houses are handsomely carpeted; but the state to which these carpets are reduced by the universal disregard of the spittoon with which every honourable member is accommodated, and the extraordinary improvements on the pattern which are squirted and dabbled upon it in every direction, do not admit of being described.

"I will merely observe, that I strongly recommend all strangers not to look at the floor; and if they happen to drop anything, though it be their purse, not to pick it up with an ungloved hand on any account.

"It is somewhat remarkable too, at first, to say the least, to see so many honourable members with swelled faces; and it is scarcely less remarkable to discover that this appearance is caused by the quantity of tobacco they contrive to stow within the hollow of the cheek. It is strange enough, too, to see an honourable gentleman leaning back in his tilted chair, with his legs on the desk before him, shaping a convenient "plug" with his penknife, and, when it is quite ready for use, shooting the old one from his mouth as from a pop-gun, and clapping the new one in its place."

Mr. Dickens wanted to see the South and observe slavery first hand. He was revolted by what he saw in Richmond, both by the condition of the slaves themselves and by the white's attitudes towards slavery. In American Notes, the book written after he returned to England describing his American visit, he wrote scathingly about the institution of slavery, citing newspaper accounts of runaway slaves horribly disfigured by their cruel masters.


Reviews

Written by fellpony (1652 comments posted) 11th March 2008
This is interesting as background to the period - especially the horrors of the tobacco-spittled carpets, ugh! - though I'm not sure how it impinges on the Red Devils theme.  
 
I'm curious (pardon me) about how you are getting all this into print - is some of it OCR-ed? I only ask because of one or two unusual typos, eg, "True to her work" instead of "True to her word" and "His proportions were well-sounded" instead of "His proportions were well-rounded" - which are unlike you :)
Thanks Sue
Written by jean.day (2326 comments posted) 11th March 2008
I have corrected those now. I think it was just carelessness, and not rechecking after doing a spell check. I did OCR some of the material, later on, but not those bits.  
 
Also Sue
Written by jean.day (2326 comments posted) 11th March 2008
You came to this story late, so probably are not aware that this is about a school writing assignment. Mattie, my heroine, has chosen to write about her father and was forced to include Custer in her project. The name Red Devils comes from the most well known quote by her father. But the other children in the class are also doing projects - and each needs, I feel, to have their 2 chapters' worth of written work shown - and that is how Dickens comes to be in this section. I also will be posting things about Twain and Lincoln - and have already done Sacagawea, Harriet Beecher Stowe and P.T. Barnum.

Written by Fledermaus (3448 comments posted) 11th March 2008
Back then the world must have been a lot bigger than it is now. As in America being further away and more exotic. It's nice how your characters travel the atlantic and things can be seen from both sides.
Thanks Fledermaus
Written by jean.day (2326 comments posted) 11th March 2008
Dickens main reason for his trip to the States on that occasion I don't even touch on. It was because the copyright laws didn't exist that had any teeth, and his work was being stolen and he felt he had to do something about it.
Ah, I see
Written by fellpony (1652 comments posted) 11th March 2008
I was misled by the title into thinking the whole story was about Mattie's discoveries about Custer and the Sioux tribes. It's still interesting though!

Written by bluecity (416 comments posted) 11th March 2008
Oh yes, Dickens' trip to America. I'm not sure many Americans relish his descriptions of America in Martin Chuzzlewit! 
 
Although Dickens is one of my favourites, like Fellpony, I feel we have drifted off off-message a little. 
 
Rosemary
Thanks again Rosemary
Written by jean.day (2326 comments posted) 13th March 2008
He did apologize on his second trip - for the things he said in Martin Chuzzlewit - but of course, he didn't rewrite the book.
Hi jean.Day
Written by beatricelouise (215 comments posted) 15th March 2008
The author, 'Charles Dickens' is what drew me to this piece. He is one of my favourite authors, though wordy. I thought writing about his trip to America was so interesting and I never did know why he came. Now I know thanks to you. I read up on him often, but that little bit of info never did cross my findings.  
 
A wonderful read, interesting and good subject matter.
Thanks Beatrice
Written by jean.day (2326 comments posted) 16th March 2008
It is always nice to get a new reader. I will check out what you have written now.

Written by Phil (6836 comments posted) 29th May 2008
I think it wise to keep returning to the other students' essays. It stops this becoming a straight forward academic work couched as a piece of fiction. The scene was set at the beginning of the book explaining different children's projects. Personally, I think it works well. 
 
As for this chapter - I'm not aware of what Dickens said of America - only that much of it was not complimentary. Still, if the press then were anything like they are now, they'd have reported his unguarded - and perhaps negative - comments before any praise. 
 
Enjoyed. 
 
Phil

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