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unison (zak.b)
By katejayne
11 March 2008
just comment lol

time passes by like
empty waves slowly
on the rise and fall
waters crash fires burn
wind blows the tide is turned
nevertheless more to come
in this desolate waste
were on the run
but hope is bright and fear is lost
as once again we re-unite.

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Written by emmahazel (5 comments posted) 11th March 2008
I love the rhythm of the poem and how you break the sentences! maybe a little hard to read because of the font but the poem is excellent!
this
Written by katejayne (18 comments posted) 17th May 2008
It almost reminds me of Navy song, lol. 
Poems make things sound so much better. 
 
The end is pretty. 
Shame it doesn't always work that way. 
 
xox

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