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| Ocean Eyes | |
| By emmahazel | ||
| 11 March 2008 | ||
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This is written a long time ago to one of my longer stories Right and the Heart. Can't really remember how I got the idear or anything about. so ![]() You could see the ocean in her eyes Deep, blue mystery Never still-standing Always dancing to the sound of a lullaby or the wrath of nature Deep, blue mystery spell-binding Forcing you to surrender The place you go for understanding of the world Or just for a peace of mind It is the place that makes sense without further comprehension But with its serenity comes a dark side too A wild strength that shows its importance and gains respect A dark side that is as fascinating and entrancing as its opposite Without ever causing anger or hate You could see the ocean in her eyes A sea of emotions A Mesmeric sincerity Deep, blue mystery A glimpse of her soul Change in a heartbeat As the world revealed its secrets
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