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Ocean Eyes
By emmahazel
11 March 2008
This is written a long time ago to one of my longer stories Right and the Heart. Can't really remember how I got the idear or anything about. soEmbarassed

You could see the ocean in her eyes

Deep, blue mystery

Never still-standing

Always dancing to the sound of a lullaby or the wrath of nature

Deep, blue mystery spell-binding

Forcing you to surrender

The place you go for understanding of the world

Or just for a peace of mind

It is the place that makes sense without further comprehension

But with its serenity comes a dark side too

A wild strength that shows its importance and gains respect

A dark side that is as fascinating and entrancing as its opposite

Without ever causing anger or hate

You could see the ocean in her eyes

A sea of emotions

A Mesmeric sincerity

Deep, blue mystery

A glimpse of her soul

Change in a heartbeat

As the world revealed its secrets

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