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Scope Of Fate
By Justice_Ri_Der
11 March 2008
The idea for this story came to me as a combination of a History lesson and a match of Halo. HaHa. I hope you enjoy it.

It's Late. Or getting at least.
I'm tired. VERY tired.
Most of the enemy is either dead or dying.
How old is he? Probably about 16, 17...
Regardless, he's an enemy, he must be eliminated.
But what's the point?
The poor boy doesn't even notice I'm here.
Although hiding in the grass is a chore.
It's not like there's anyone around to see me.
In fact, where's my battalion?
No matter. To the subject at hand.
I have...7 rounds left. That should be enough.
He looks unarmed. He looks like he's trying to find his battalion.
Wait a minute. No weapons would suggest that he's a messenger. That makes sense.
I do hope he notices the dead bodies around him. The smell must be murder.
I hope the smell doesn't reach me then...
This rifle is getting heavy. I must make a decision.
I have a clear shot of his head, chest, and if need be, his legs.
But what I am going to report?
"I shot an enemy messenger today!!!"
"Medal Of Honour, Son!!"
Not likely.
But what if he us relaying vital information to the enemy?
I bet it's something like "They've run out of Ketchup! Now is the time to strike!!"
Well I'll make sure we restock brother...
Yikes! My gun just slipped! I hope he didn't hear that...
Where was I? Right, decision time.
There will be no promotions for this kill, or even congratulations.
All I know is that this boy's doom lies within the shaft of this rifle.
The trigger is close, yet feels so distant from my hands.
This dying grass may hide my body, but it cannot hide my hesitation.
(Nor a terrible itch that is creeping up my...)
Oh No! He's walking away. I must take a shot.
...
He's too far now.
I could always follow him slowly and stealth kill him.
Nah, it's getting dark. My arms hurt too much to even try it.
Guess it's time to leave then.
I just hope I made the right decision.
It's just one German messenger boy.
What could possibly happen to this world if I let him live?
It's not like he's going to become an evil dictator and take over half of Europe...

Reviews
The penny drops
Written by John_O (150 comments posted) 18th March 2008
Hi J 
Nice little twist in the tale end there, Hitler was a cycle messenger in the first world war.  
There are a few places where there is either a typo or something not quite right, for example 'He looks like he's trying to for his battalion.' Trying to find ? 
'I do hope he notices the dead bodies around him.' this didn't make sense to me. 
'.....and stealth kill him.' and quietly do him in.  
Little niggles which spoil an otherwise well paced story 
On a historical note, did they have ketchup in 1914 ? 
John_O

Written by Justice_Ri_Der (5 comments posted) 18th March 2008
Sorry about the typos, but otherwise, this wasn't meant to be historically accurate, so I don't see why I need to be direct or use more terminology of the time. Such as stealth kill. It's what I meant.
Shouldn’t work
Written by ianhobsonuk (180 comments posted) 19th March 2008
This line-by-line trail of thoughts shouldn’t work, but it does. If it lacks anything, it’s fear. 
 
Ian

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