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Penis Erectus
By punchy
12 March 2008


Penis eructus
Whocan protectus
Gropus devourus
Slobus an pokus
proden provokus
Tighten the kneesen
kickem en squeezem
screamen thenleavem
headen forfreedom

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Written by Robru (219 comments posted) 12th March 2008
:roll Really? How old are you? They tell me its not like that any more. I can't remember. :? I like this one.

Written by punchy (500 comments posted) 12th March 2008
I'm 38 with a vivid memory and a mental age of about 12! 

Written by Phil (6713 comments posted) 12th March 2008
Hurrah. Bugger decorum - let's have more rhymes about knobs. 
 
Made me laugh. That makes it a winner to start. 
I liked the way it went from Latinish to Germanish. 
 
Phil :grin

Written by Steve_K (55 comments posted) 25th March 2008
he, he...nice little poem

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