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My favourite things
By punchy
12 March 2008
 Sirens and fighting
Windows with boards
 posters defaced
And hoodies in hoards
Graffiti and needles
 kids that say Fuck
Snogging in bus stops
parks full of muck
Grannies complaining
Drivers enraged
Chav teenage mothers
14 and engaged
Dope smoking brownies
Makeup on kids
Pushy rich mothers
Who back stab and bitch
teachers with issues
old men that leer
At girls in their blazers
dealing in gear
pubs full of drinkers
With scars and tattoos
Binge drinking dick heads
Snort coke in the loo
Sitting in cars
While tarts suck them off
Are rich city brokers
Or men of the cloth
Middle aged mothers
comparing their kids
While having a facial
Or waxing their bits
Fat balding builders
A bum crack display
Spitting on pavements
And letching all day
  I simply remember my favourite things
 and then I don't feel so bad!

Reviews

Written by victoriaplum (5 comments posted) 12th March 2008
Brilliant!

Written by Phil (6719 comments posted) 12th March 2008
Top stuff, PP. A few bumpy bits along the way - but unpretentious fun with a bit of an edge. I like. 
 
Phil

Written by punchy (500 comments posted) 13th March 2008
Cheers guys x

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