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By audrie
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12 March 2008 |
As you know, I know zip all about the construction of poetry, and I understand that my previous effort was wrong, so here is another one about 'natural' events!
A Woolly Mammoth
asleep under the tundra
is preserved in ice.|
Written by Fledermaus (3248 comments posted) 12th March 2008 | | Nice one! Those paleontologists would love it. One sentence and the linebreaks nicely at the borders of the phrases. Good one. | Thanks
Written by audrie (451 comments posted) 12th March 2008 | Fledermaus, the paleontologists certainly get in a tizzy when they manage to find one.
I have a sense of the ridiculous, rather than a sense of humour, hence the daft little haiku! |
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