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By punchy
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13 March 2008 |
Tapping at the door
with its damp and muddy paw
Is the pointer with no patience
Who I'm trying to ignore
The tapping gets more frequent
like a metronome at speed
I wish I'd got a dog flap
or a less impatient breed
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Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3566 comments posted) 13th March 2008 | | A funny bit of work, it raised a smile and that's a rare occurrence on the site these days | discipline
Written by JWallendas (5 comments posted) 13th March 2008 | | i had a dog that did that and after i shot it , he never bothered me again with his infernal scratch, tapping. | Jwallendas
Written by punchy (535 comments posted) 13th March 2008 | | Thankyou so much for your review, at least I now have the answer, I was wondering what the best possible solution to my problem was. Would a blunt instrument be as effective? |
Written by Josie (2845 comments posted) 13th March 2008 | | I would give anything I could just to have my dear little Gemma back with me again, scratching on my door. She died at the age of 18 and a half (Jack Russell) and a more faithful friend you could never have than your dog. Make the most of every single minute with yours for you will never find a human being who can give you the love and loyalty that a dog can. As for your poem, I loved the chug chug chug of the rhythm. It matched the scratch, scratch, scratch extremely well. Think: How would you like to be locked out of your home in this cold winter weather? You'd scratch too. |
Written by Phil (6959 comments posted) 13th March 2008 | Enjoyed this, PP. Rhythmically comic. I struggle to cope with a cat - a dog would drive me insane.
Phil
Quick script for JWallenda:
Fred: I shot my dog last night.
Des: Was it mad?
Fred: Bloody furious mate.
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Written by Becca2010 (24 comments posted) 12th June 2008 | | This is very cute... I have to cats that are incessently tapping on my door. Too bad I can't think of a witty poem about those two. I really enjoyed this. |
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