my new view of money- MONEY IS A DICTATOR! Enjoy the truth my friends!
Money, money
Wipe my ass
Money,money
I'm 1st class
Money, money
like it fresh
money, money
eat my flesh
money, money
dictator
money, money
there's no cure
so damn green
money, money
no inbetween
money, money
buys a car
money, money
it goes far
money, money
i'm obsessed
money, money
get no rest
money, money
i'm insane
money, money
spare my brain
money, money
makes me bleed
money, money
never free
money, money
holds me tight
money, money
out of sight
money, money
debt till death
money, money
takes last breath
money, money
pain & strife
momey, money
took my life
money, money
coins and bills
money, money
buys me pills
money, money
evil eye
money, money
suicide
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Written by Josie (2845 comments posted) 14th March 2008 | | You are right to a certain extent, but we do need enough to live on, to buy the bread we eat, a roof over our heads and clothes. But money can be, like alcohol and drugs, addictive, and people think they cannot be happy without it. I pointed out in a poem tha I wrote that money doesn't bring happiness, but neither does poverty. As with everything, there must be something in between. | made me laugh
Written by mia_ms_kim (1057 comments posted) 14th March 2008 | It was fun. Money has a powerful hold on most of us, and controls us in more ways than we are aware of. I think when we give it up (I'm not talking about throwing the lot away!), it loses power over us, and we experience freedom we haven't known before. Enjoyed it.
Mia | YAY!
Written by TurboWolffe (98 comments posted) 15th March 2008 | Yes, Josie, I understand that money IS a necessity, but it really does control the world. IT IS NOT PEOPLE WHO CONTROL THE WORLD, BUT MONEY! It only seems like people do so, because they HAVE money (and lots of it too!). I'm happy to hear that it was also amusing as well. I just came up with it one night on the way home, and my mom said it was true. my brother didn't quite get it, but for goodness sakes, he's only 7!
Now, the first little rhyming stanza thingy:
money, money
wipe my ass
money, money
i'm 1st class
it refers to people who are so rich, they could wipe themselves with all of their old bills.
KILL THE BILL & PURLOIN THE COIN!
-TW | Just found this
Written by mr_soul (126 comments posted) 17th March 2008 | Just came across this tonight. Really good, definately enjoyed it. And the message is ofcourse a powerful one. Money corrupts. And we need to ask ourselves who really controls our countries. The governments? Obviously they have great power. But big powerful companies with all their wealth have a huge stranglehold over governments. It is often they who can decide major decisions through their huge influence. We can vote in presidents and prime ministers, we don't elect the chairman of these companies. So I could relate to the different interpretations of money being a dictator. It can control us, as individuals, but it can also control our countries as well.
Great stuff, really enjoyed it TurboWolffe | Thank You!
Written by TurboWolffe (98 comments posted) 19th March 2008 | | Wow, thanks for the word, mr_soul! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it! I'm becoming somewhat of a weirdo so... =) | good
Written by katejayne (18 comments posted) 27th May 2008 | really liked the message,
and saying money over and over in my head made it sound funny.
some parts didn't conform to the rhyme you got going, but hey, thats poetry. |
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