This work is mostly based on the stories my mother told me as I was growing up. She lived through the Korean War, and she saw things a child should not see, and survived to tell the tales to her daughter.
This is my attempt to put them down on paper (hard disk?) so they are not forgotten by her children and her children's children, (while at the same time having a go at a new genre in an effort to learn the craft of writing).
There were three of them.
They were Americans, young men—really boys, chained together like animals.
It was the first time Toni saw Americans. She was seven. And she stared, holding onto her mother’s hand, bolted to the dirt road strewn with spent artifacts of war. One boy stood out from the rest. His hair looked like ripe wheat and his skin like bronze. And he had the sky in his eyes. He sat on the street, shirtless, barefoot and filthy, as did the other boys. A communist guard with a bayonet was watching them. Actually he was nodding off to sleep. His comrades probably went off to raid the local market for food.
Children screamed in fright at the Americans and ran to their mothers. Some threw stones at them. The communists had told them Americans were devils who ate little boys and girls. But the children picked on Toni, too, in her village. They called her names because she was the local shaman’s granddaughter. They made fun of her name. But then her grandmother disapproved of her name, too. She was named after a holy man, her mother had told her. Her name meant earth and clay.
Toni observed the Americans in fascination. She could find no evidence of horns on their heads—or tails. But then they might be hiding them under all that grimy hair and torn clothes.
The Americans ignored the onlookers and their persecutors. The boy with the dirty straw hair reached out surreptitiously, and picked up a piece of yellow melon skin from the ground, that someone had thrown out. He took care not to make a sound. After carefully brushing off the dirt from the peeled melon skin, he divided it in three pieces, and gave two pieces to the other boys and took one piece for himself. It was clear he was their leader. The boys ate silently but hungrily, sucking their dirty fingers.
Toni felt her mother’s grip tightening. Her mother’s eyes welled up, and she began rummaging through her grocery bag and found two long sticks of pumpkin candy. She wrapped them in the folds of her long skirt and broke them into pieces. After making sure the guard was still asleep, she quickly approached the yellow-haired American and put them into his hands. She hurriedly indicated his pocket. Understanding her intention, the boy nodded at once and stuffed his pocket with the candy pieces. Satisfied, she turned away quickly and strode away with Toni.
Toni had to run to keep up with her mother on jelly-like legs. Her heart was thumping from paralysing fear. She thought the guard might awaken ferociously any moment and pierce her mother through with the glistening bayonet. There was no forgiveness for those who helped Americans. Or even worse, Toni thought the blue-eyed American might jump up with bared fangs and eat her and her mother. Toni had never been so frightened in her life.
Her mother began crying once they were out of danger. ‘That’s somebody’s boy. They are someone’s children,’ she sobbed as she led the way home. Toni kept looking back at the Americans. She couldn’t help it. The yellow-haired boy was staring at them with his intense blue eyes, then he mouthed something at Toni, pointing at her mother. Later in life Toni understood the boy was saying ‘Thank you.’ Toni often thought about the boy, and wondered if he’d lived.
That night when Toni went to sleep lying next to her mother, she said, ‘Mommy. When I grow up I’m going to marry the boy with the sky in his eyes.’
Her mother didn’t understand. ‘Shush,’ she scolded her daughter’s foolishness, pulling the cotton blanket to her little chin. ‘Go to sleep.’
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Written by Fledermaus (3487 comments posted) 14th March 2008 | I don't know about Korea, but from what I heard, it was pretty common in some parts of China to refer to Westerners as 'ghosts', and this wasn't even done with bad intentions. Yet I can imagine that if the Koreans referred to them in a similar way, and they DID get into a conflict with them, it's a small step from calling someone a 'ghost' to calling someone a 'demon'... This was a very good piece. It shows how American soldiers often end up in very nasty wars. It's sad people take out their anger on someone because he wears the wrong uniform, yet that's probably how wars work. Both sides didn't exactly act very nicely in Korea, so I can imagine people were angry, yet that is of course not the fault of individual soldiers... As this is in extended I suppose you are going to continue? | Fledermaus, thank you Written by mia_ms_kim (1057 comments posted) 14th March 2008 | for your kind review. I have more disjointed pieces, so I will probably continue for a while if people are reading. N. Korea demonises America because America helped South Korea in the war. My father and his cousin, aged 15-17 I think, got dragged into the army (south) as well. Really the uniform they wore depended on, I think, who got to them first, north or south. My Dad and his cousin ran away on foot for days on end, and lived. When they went back to school eventually, so many boys, their own friends just were not there, dragged away, gone, dead somewhere (noone knows where). Many parents went insane. Mia
| Written by bluecity (432 comments posted) 15th March 2008 | This piece really talks, Mia. We all grow up with the tales our mothers told us as we they bathed us and dressed us. Mine told me stories of air-raids and blackouts, and bad girls who "carried on with" American GIs. You must continue to write down ALL of this. I love the way you describe the Americans, first through the layer of demonisation imposed by the Communist regime, then through Toni and her mother perceiving their humanity. The child actually looking for their horns and tails spoke volumes. Look forward to reading more. Rosemary | Rosemary, thank you Written by mia_ms_kim (1057 comments posted) 15th March 2008 | for your encouragement. I agree with you about our mothers. I didn't realise how much influence my mother had on me until I began writing fiction based on true stories. Strangely out of all the stories my mother told me, this one about the young American soldiers struck me the deepest. So I started with it. I hope to write up some more, and weave in other stories I've heard from other daughters who have/had mothers like mine. Mia | Written by Merioneth (79 comments posted) 25th April 2008 | ‘Mommy. When I grow up I’m going to marry the boy with the sky in his eyes.’ That was really, really beautiful. That will stick with me. ~Meri | Merioneth, thank you Written by mia_ms_kim (1057 comments posted) 25th April 2008 | I'm glad you liked that line. That line means a lot to me, too, because Toni is someone I really care about, though she is a fictional character. To me, she is very real. Thank you again. Mia | Good read. Written by edjones (14 comments posted) 29th April 2008 | I enjoyed this and agree with 'bluecity' that you should continue. It is interesting to see an independent view from the communist north which survived the propagandist teachings - though propaganda was by no means only a feature of the north, I believe. I am curious how a child of this time and place came to be named 'Toni' - a name unusual enough for her to be made fun of. Perhaps another episode may enlighten me. | Ed, thank you Written by mia_ms_kim (1057 comments posted) 30th April 2008 | for your encouraging review. I have written Toni in and out of sequence, 300-400 pages and not even half finished. So I decided I was being too ambitious, and wrote smaller novels to learn to scope and finish stories. Toni's childhood is one of the places I got stuck. I might polish a few more pieces and post them on GW. Thank you again. Mia | An interesting story Written by Papule (21 comments posted) 14th May 2008 | | This is an interesting story. After reading a Korean childhood memoir called 'Ten Thousand Sorrows' by Elizabeth Kim, and some Chinese memoir or historical narrations, it came to my mind to tell the story of my family and myself one day. I do agree with the previous readers that you have to continue and I wish you good luck. If you have not read the book I just mentioned, please read it! | Thank you, Papule Written by mia_ms_kim (1057 comments posted) 14th May 2008 | for your kind comments. Actually I have read Elizabeth Kim's autobiography - several times in fact! What a story, what a life! I've also read Amy Tan, Salman Rushdie, Jean Sasson etc. I think western readers are wanting to read about other exotic cultures, so some agents today look for multicultural writers. There definitely is a market for you, Papule, I think. Me? I don'tknow - I'm not sufficiently Korean to tell a truly Korean story. I'm presently trying to work out exactly what genre I want to write, so I'm in the think-mood... I could post the next bit on Toni, but don't feel inspired enough to polish it up!!! But you certainly need to continue your Saga stories, Papule. I haven't read or heard of Kurdish writers yet. Mia | Wonderful! Written by Scrawl (80 comments posted) 26th June 2008 | | Mia, this is wonderful. Even though it is obviously dealing with war the child's perspective makes it a compellingly different tale. The little kindness of Toni's mother is something the boys would remember I imagine and the descriptions are beautifully handled. Well done. | Written by Nick (163 comments posted) 26th June 2008 | Mia - I Really liked this story and the new one you just posted in shorts. I agree with all the previous comments on both the stories so there is no need for me to re-iterate them but will just say that i loved the line "boy with the sky in his eyes." Keep up the good work - I look forward to reading more. Nick | Mia, again Written by Brett (983 comments posted) 26th June 2008 | I really enjoyed this and along with your latest post there seems to be so much scope. Dah! Nick has beaten me to it! "the boy with the sky in his eyes." Lovely. Great stuff, Mia. Cheers | Scrawl, Nick, Brett Written by mia_ms_kim (1057 comments posted) 27th June 2008 | Thank you for such kind comments! I am so encouraged. A year ago, I used to wonder if native English speakers could understand my writing. I find it hard to believe I don't feel the need to ask that very basic (and fearful) question anymore. I'm glad you love the 'the boy with the sky in his eyes'. I see this story as Toni's search for 'that boy' and how she metaphorically finds him as an adult. Thank you again, everyone! Mia |
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