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Kevin The Keyhole.
By maipenrai
14 March 2008
Kevin the Keyhole
is a nasty old man
looking through keyholes
whenever he can
watching those ladies undress,
Kevin the Keyhole
is a dirty old man,
pity, he's me dad.

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Oh, dear
Written by mia_ms_kim (993 comments posted) 14th March 2008
The ending! But I thought it was funny. 
Mia :)

Written by Fledermaus (3246 comments posted) 15th March 2008
Hahaha... Fun poem!
thanks
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 15th March 2008
Mia, Fledermaus for your comments. 
Bernie

Written by Phil (6681 comments posted) 16th March 2008
So Bernie, were you conceived through a key hole? :grin  
 
Phil
Thanks
Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 17th March 2008
Phil for your comments. 
Bernie

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