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Abuse
By sarahh
17 March 2008
I am sixteen, my parents are loving. I can only imagine how this relationship would work out.

New Awakening, hidden from all.
You tried to hide the one you loved most.
but the captured dream of freedom,
while the free are dieing from causes unknown.
No need for pointless words they crumble
when you speak.
The floor is just one more situation I have to clean.
Take another drink; in the morning you will be humble.
By the next night you'll forget the lesson did sink.

I am dieing in this cage, your words of
love and caution are meaningless.
You try to protect the one you love over all.
But I am devising to end this life so sudden.
The knife in your in spine, I beg of you it is not mine.
These are the bruises on my wrist, neck and arm, but this
is the life that girls like me chooses.
So I say farewell, and that your heart is well.
Cause next time you see me, you'll be looking up from hell.









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