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| Daydream | |
| By Justice_Ri_Der | ||||||||||||
| 18 March 2008 | ||||||||||||
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A funny Religious Education lesson and a build up of material inspired this one. I try to make this as involved as possible, but I'm not sure where it's going myself. Guess that's the way daydreams work. Day dream, day scene A bird on a perch could never be so serene. I can see the mountains from here. I can see a forest and a prancing deer. Wasn't there a film about an animal like that? Demon-slaying, steal your soul cat. This reminds me of the time I stayed up for a day. Darn monkey knocked me down and took my money away!! Spiky hair. Had a bad night son? I'm going to attack, you better run!! God of pain! God of thunder! I'm missed the ship, now what a blunder... Brave warrior, immortalized on this shelf. Foul cretin! Defend thyself!!! Legends untold. Legends eternal. I must record my findings in this journal... Human bones, so small and brittle. That looked like it hurt. Even just a little. A car so shiny, too bad it is destroyed. A hole so dark, it is the void. I'm hearing voices now, they sound so loud. Oh please, I want to stare at this cloud. My time is running out, and so is my HP. It's been a while since I drank some tea. Oh wait, I was in the middle of something. I can see the rocks, what do they bring? I am urged along, I don't have a choice. They wind me, I can't use my voice. I begin to fall, at a break-neck speed. An execution, this is all I need. You may think I will die, I'm just hitting the sack. Once this ordeal is over, kids I'll be back!!
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