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Poetry
Light at dark
By mightymoose
19 March 2008

In the deep of the night
dark and light coexist
from nature or from man
lucent traces persist.

Scattering light
in the clear night sky
satellites and stars
are the entrancing tie.

Darkness encroaches
in the serenity of twilight
then fireflies start flashing
their phosphorescent sight.

The moon reflects
the sun it's glory
illuminating night's secrets
recanting the story.

Dark and light
are all the same to you
when my walls are aglow
aloneness shines through.

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Hey
Written by sarahh (18 comments posted) 18th March 2008
I like the sense of this poem, though it was a little hard to read, at some parts I had to reread it two or three times. I liked really liked the vocabulary you used. Though the last line confused me when you used the word 'aloneness' the word; not the meaning didn't really fit in with the poem. Also the meaning kinda got to me too. But other then that I really liked it. 
Sarah

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