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Poetry
The Giggle
By margarita
19 March 2008
These late late nights
Try to take their toll
With shadows under eyes
And yawning, wide, whole.
And if I really wanted
My temper could snap
And all those I affronted
Would shrink right back.
But the little giggle in my belly
Makes me smile all day
And laugh at altercation
Keeps my mood at bay.
These dancing butterflies
This tricky giddy waltz
These happy days
With surmountable faults.

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Written by anaisanais (62 comments posted) 19th March 2008
A nice light hearted piece with good rhyme within, looking forward to reading more.... ;)

Written by sam_duke (19 comments posted) 19th March 2008
A very charming poem; a reminder of the simple joy of being a parent-to-be, whether mother or father, even in moments of pain.

Written by margarita (30 comments posted) 19th March 2008
thanks very much for the replies guys! I said I'd give the rhyming thing a go, and it's actually quite a fun little exercise.... 
as for the parent-to-be-thing, Sam it's not what I intended for the meaning but I love the interpretation! 
 
Cheers

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