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What Dreams Remain
By Robru
20 March 2008

 The human cost of drought



          It breaks my heart to see bare earth
          When the pastures should be green.
          Its so bloody dry it makes me cry
          When I think what might have been.
     
          Cattle fat and lazy 
          Daily ask me why
          There's only dry weeds growing,
          Well, look up at the sky.
     
          We need to see  some clouds up there,
          Dark clouds of sombre hue,
          Not the clear skies that we've got,
          They're always that dusty blue.
     
          I'll have to sell  the cattle
          The big ones and the small,
          Now the grass is all but gone;
          I just can't feed them all..
     
          Will the money from the selling
          Be enough to pay all debts,
          Or will I just up and leave the farm?
          I haven't decided yet.
     
          I owe the bank
          I owe the store
          Don't know what to do;
          Can't think  any more.
     
          I guess I'll have to find a job
          To support the wife and kid;
          Dad lived well while on the farm,
          Outside work he never did.
     
          Depression is a lousy thing,
          I thought I'd end my life,
          That would just be too unfair
          To my long suff'ring wife.
     
          So I'll get a job, no matter what,
          Ignore all that nagging pain,
          Re-assess my way of living,
          See what dreams remain.


Reviews

Written by fellpony (1580 comments posted) 20th March 2008
You're doing all right if your cattle are still fat in spite of the drought :) 
 
I have friends in Oz, so I know where you're coming from in this one and I thought you could have gone a lot deeper.

Written by Josie (2732 comments posted) 20th March 2008
Oh Robru - how I wiish we could send you some of the rain that we're getting here every day. Rain and wind, rain and wind, and I think snow too. Our ground is waterlogged and I have daffodils whose stems are sitting in water. My heart goes out to you in Australia, for I have seen what it can be like. I saw sheep in Tasmania, who looked like they were in a rugby scrum with a sand storm blowing around them so hard that we, on the road, couldn't see to drive and had to turn back away from it. Fields parched and dry, trees dying. Awful! So sorry.

Written by Fledermaus (3238 comments posted) 20th March 2008
Very nice poem, touching something we luckily do not experience in Europe. I guess there's probably too much rather than too little water over here. If it's based on reality, I hope you'll have rain soon.

Written by mia_ms_kim (973 comments posted) 20th March 2008
It's heart-breaking for rural oz. I read the suicide rate is high among the farmers, and many depend on charity for basic food items. And many just pack up and leave. But I thought the drought was easing in NSW with the recent rain, or am I dreaming? 
 
Mia :?

Written by Robru (204 comments posted) 20th March 2008
Comments have raised questions. Fat cattle in a drought? Yes, the core breeding stock that would enable the farmer to start again, hand fed and spoiled to the point of bankruptcy. I could not have gone any deeper into this subject, it's too close to me as I live it every day.No one really wants to hear of stock just falling dead in the paddocks from lack of water, framers going bankrupt, even committing suicide, no I have gone deep enough. Just as food for thought try imagininggoing for a long long drive of ,say 3 hours at 100km per hour and not seeing any grass at all, just dust. The drought in NSW is easing and after about seven years in some places the drought declared area has declined to less than 50% of the state right now. Our area is now reasonable. The state of NSW is roughly 1000kn north to south and about 1200km east to west[just a rough guess] Its a big place and there are some places that haven't seen a drought at all in 250 years.

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