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Pendle - Part 3
Written by fellpony
20 March 2008

John Law the local chapman is a man both stout and hale.
He walks across the countryside with packs of goods for sale.
His ribbons and his pins are simple wares for maids and squires,
But he’ll order up the quality for her who so desires.

One morning in the town he meets with Alizon the wild
Who stands across the way and thinks to coax him like a child;
She begs of him a paper of cheap pins to take and sell
And she’s shocked and then she’s surly when he tells her, “Go to Hell!”

“You think I’m nowt, John Law! you fool! you’ll find that I have teeth.
Though naked in my petticoat, my black dog runs beneath.”
“Begone, wild wench,” says Pedlar John, with paling cheek, “begone,
and keep your cursing for the men and boys you leech upon.”

Then turning, he begins to run, and running, he falls lame;
and Alizon is proud to think that she must be to blame.
“There, sir, you should have pleased me; where the black dog bites he’ll hold.
And what he bites, you’ll never cure, though doctors choke on gold.”

Young Abraham, the son of John, is of the toughest sort;
He carries John indoors and has the wild young hoyden caught.
“You cursed my father in the street, and here he lies in pain,
I’ll charge you straight with witchcraft and you’ll never curse again.”

“O spare me sir, forgive me, for I never meant you harm!”
Alizon cries, and moans, and weeps, in pitiful alarm.
“Well, I forgive you, wench,” says John, but Abraham, more stern,
is set to make the girl face retribution in her turn.


*

Questioned by Roger Nowell, in the courtroom at Read Hall,
Slick Alizon confesses how she made the pedlar fall.
She hopes to ease her penalties, so tells of Demdike’s harms,
conspiring with the Chattox against livestock on the farms.

Her brother Jamie tells the witchcraft Alizon performs,
his mother’s waxen images, and conjuring of storms;
So Squinting Lizzie takes the stand and sourly makes defence
that she has never pictured folk, and Jamie has no sense.

But she too tries plea-bargaining; to prove her word is good
she tells of Demdike’s witch-mark, where familiars suck her blood.
Most damning of the witnesses is Jennet, still so young,
who tells of human teeth for spells, and fat from babies wrung.

The testimonies multiply which Nowell hears at Read.
His fellow judge Nick Bannister takes good and solemn heed.
Bess, Lizzie, Chattox, Alizon, and Demdike’s pebble eyes,
are sent down into Lancaster for Lammastide Assize.

*

Reviews

Written by Fledermaus (3307 comments posted) 20th March 2008
You managed to weave in most superstitions about witches. Good to see some really old fashioned ones after Harry Potter and the Charmed Ones. Back to hags with crows and cats.

Written by fellpony (1617 comments posted) 20th March 2008
This is a true tale, Fledermaus - the two warring families and the tale telling are all recorded in the trials of the time (1612):  
 
http://www.pendlelife.co.uk/roundabout/opencms/Tourism/Tourist_information/Witches.html 
http://www.advantageinternet.net/Witch/text.html 
 
And, the well known 1951 novel, "Mist over Pendle" by Robert Neill.
For all 3 parts..
Written by Brett (785 comments posted) 20th March 2008
I liked these very much. I have cause to pass through Pendle quite often, witches aplenty (and not just in imagery). I adore narrative poems and found this very entertaining. I am currently working on my own narrative from an original idea, and you have helped me in making a decision to break it up into parts. 
Enjoyed it enormousely. 
Cheers 
Brett

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