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Pendle - Part 4
Written by fellpony
20 March 2008
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A holy day for Christians is Good Friday, when the Cross
held up our Saviour to the sun in agony and loss.
But Pendle’s coven meet this day to feast and sing and wail,
And, at the Malkin Tower, plot to break their kin from gaol.

But Jennet tells the magistrates, who hunt the coven down
and send the plotters chained to join their sisters in the town.
Old Demdike cheats the hangman. Lying blindly down, she dies.
Ten others are convicted at the Lammastide Assize.

The gallows is a new affair that takes ten souls in all;
it stands before a baying crowd within the Castle wall.
Those few who were acquitted may be back before too long.
No prayers to God or Devil save the necks of those who hang.

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So all you mystic ladies who have listened to my song,
The tale of Pendle witchcraft running days and years along,
consider whether Alizon and Demdike had the skill
to terrify a neighbourhood with hints that they could kill.

Consider whether Christian souls should name those deeds as sin
among the many terrors that we conjure from within.
Consider whether witchcraft is a clever thing or no;
or are we simply gullible when fear begins to grow.

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Reviews

Written by Veronica_Milvus (603 comments posted) 20th March 2008
Bravo! Tremendous! 
 
A folk classic, worthy of a tune from Fairport Convention or Steel Eye Span.
Well paced .........
Written by Bagheera (680 comments posted) 20th March 2008
......... and took me gently by the throat from the first line to the last! 
What I don't understand, Sue, is why you imply in the final couplet that witches and witchcraft may not be real......... I've met several [ALL of the 'white' variety!!! :eek ] at various times, and have never questioned it - I'm sure we can ALL thing of someone whose ability to 'find things' and particularly CURE OTHERS cannot be explained in logical or any other scientifically provable manner ..... don't we????
In the words of the immortal Hancock...
Written by Brett (759 comments posted) 20th March 2008
STONE ME, here's another one. I almost understand how my mother and aunt felt now waiting for the next episode of Hopalong Cassidy at the cinema. 
As a whole work this is one of the best things that I have read on this site, and to my mind the christian (no matter how bloody good their intentions) is always responsible for more sin than he is aware. 
Cheers, I'll be reading these again with relish. 
Brett

Written by Robru (212 comments posted) 20th March 2008
Great stuff. When I saw four episodes the'Rhyme of the Ancient Mariner' came to mind. As it turned out all four episodes were necessary to complete the ballad. A wonderful story which I will read again.

Written by Phil (6683 comments posted) 21st March 2008
Read these in one sitting, Sue. Thoroughly enjoyed - you know I really like narrative poetry. A good tale told well. Was it a conscious decision to stick to recorded events and not fictionalise/'gorify' it some more? 
 
Good stuff. 
 
Phil
recorded events
Written by fellpony (1603 comments posted) 21st March 2008
I've left out some of the nastier tales of poisoning that Robert Neill included in his novel to weave a more sinister mastermind thread into the story. The accusations and counter accusations remind me of feuding families on council estates. I've simplified a lot of it!

Written by maipenrai (783 comments posted) 22nd March 2008
Read all four and glad that I did, very enjoyable. 
Bernie

Written by fellpony (1603 comments posted) 22nd March 2008
thank you Bernie!

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