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| 21 March 2008 | ||||||||||||||||||
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A crude, but first-hand, account of an abusive relationship. My daughter left this man just over two years ago. He doesn’t meet my eye. She says, “He’s shy.” He stays aloof from talk; “He needs to work.” Her face is sore; “I walked into the door.” She wears long sleeves. She never did before. * I visit them at work. He’s dull and curt. “Is that your bloody mother?” “It’s OK, Mum; don’t bother.” “Where did you go today? Did you shop alone? Who’ve you been talking to? Who’s on the phone?” * She says, “I’m pregnant, Mum.” “You’d best come home.” She says she can’t; “He hates to sleep alone.” She’s heavy, milky-mild. “He wants this child. Though early on he said he wished it dead.” * In hospital she fears his angry arm; under her pillow hides the panic alarm. He punches the wall. “Scared, that’s all. Illness makes him upset; he sees a threat.” * Penned with his parents in their crowded home, she with the infant loves it alone.
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