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By Veronica_Milvus
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22 March 2008 |
COSMOPOLITAN TANKA
The magazine said
I should spray my best perfume
wherever I'd like
to be kissed. Are they crazy?
I know it would sting like hell!
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I will send
Written by patterjack (1433 comments posted) 22nd March 2008 | privately !!!  a piece of chiasmus that is apt from a male viewpoint
patterjack |
Written by Josie (2845 comments posted) 23rd March 2008 | | Ha ha - The mind boggles! Another form of Japanese poetry! Good, but I prefer English poetry. There's more melody to it. You did a good job with it though Veronica - 31 syllables. |
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3566 comments posted) 23rd March 2008 | Yes I know what you mean, the ear-lobes can be surpirsingly sensititive,can't they???
Jane |
Written by Phil (6959 comments posted) 23rd March 2008 | Oooer Missis!
So - the tanka form is for delivering smut? I'm all for it.
Phil |
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