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Homecoming Magick
By Veronica_Milvus
24 March 2008
This is a true story... but it doesn't really fit in non-fiction!  It's a sort of just so story.

HOMECOMING MAGICK

Once upon a time, Best Beloved, more than four and twenty moons ago, Veronica Milvus and her husband left their cottage in the woods for a while to visit the city of Edinburgh at the time of its Festival.  Before they left, Veronica spoke sternly to their two cats, the Shy Black One and her mother, the Naughty Torty, and said to them both:

"Now, while we are away, the Cat Lady will come every day to feed you and cuddle you, so stay in the cottage garden and don't stray down the winding lane."  The cats both promised to do what she asked.

However, there was noise and commotion in the cottage (for there were Builders in the house in those days) and while the Shy Black Cat endured it, sitting with her paws over her ears, the Naughty Torty, who was truly a Cat with Cattitude, could stand it no longer and packed up her belongings in a spotted handkerchief on a stick, or she would have done, Best Beloved, if she had had any belongings to speak of, and ventured down the winding lane, along a little ways, and up the next lane.

When Veronica and Mr Milvus returned, Naughty Torty was nowhere to be seen.  The builders and the Cat Lady had not seen her for several days.  So Veronica went out with a Notice bearing the likeness of the lost cat, and posted it through all the letterboxes in the village, with the words "HAVE YOU SEEN THIS CAT?" and her mobile phone number, emblazoned upon it.

That evening at about ten o'clock, who should pop in through the living room window (it is not very high up, Best Beloved) but the Naughty Torty, purring and happy, and with a twinkle in her amber eyes.  Veronica was very glad to see her.

The next day, while she was at work, Veronica took a call on her mobile phone from a lady in the village, who asked her if the cat had come home.  When Veronica confirmed that the Naughty Torty had indeed returned, the lady said:  "Oh good, I did some work last night, at about ten o'clock, to make sure she came home".

Now there are many things that Veronica does not know, but what she does know is that "work" in this context, must mean the casting of a Homecoming Enchantment on the Naughty Torty.  The Torty died a little while ago, and her ashes have turned to Bluebells out in the wild wood, but for ever after she was known to Veronica and her husband as the Enchanted Cat.  And sometimes, from the corners of their eyes, Veronica and Mr Milvus catch a little glimpse of a cat, slinking under the kitchen table, or dodging up the stairs.  Perhaps, once a cat is a recipent of Homecoming Magick, she can never really leave.

And the other thing that Veronica knows, Best Beloved, is that a follower of the Old Religion, practised in the Magickal Arts, lives very close at hand, just down the winding lane, along a little ways, and up the next lane...

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Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3362 comments posted) 24th March 2008
On safer territory with prose. 
If this is a true story I'm just wondering if you live in The Pludds in Gloucesterhire, some strange things go on there. 
At first I was thrown by the rather camp style but when I got to the end it all made sense. It felt like you were deliberately camping it up and then leave us feeling slightly uneasy with the ending. Reminded me a bit of Saki, who I love. 
And I'm perfectly willing to believe that the Arts are still practised by certain ladies. You'll be seeing a lot of that cat, I think

Written by fellpony (1616 comments posted) 25th March 2008
I know a very well respected British horseman whose driving team is "looked after" by a lady he refers to as The White Witch. She doesn't talk about magic though (nor, I think, would she spell it with a self-conscious K at the end). She just says, "I've had a little chat with Joey," (from 60 miles away) "and he's sorry he was naughty. He'll do better next time."

Written by Josie (2785 comments posted) 25th March 2008
Everyone has a story about cats and their strange behaviour. I have one, (a strange story) - but a friend of mine had a cat called Maurice, and every April he packed his bags and went away until October, when he promptly turned up again for the winter. People said that, from the window of the train to Leeds, Maurice could be seen sitting in a deck chair in a field, sunglasses on, reading the Catshire Post. Believe that if you will - but it is true that every year he disappeared. She knew when it was about to happen when Maurice, the night before, became extremely loveable with owners. Loved your story Veronica.

Written by Fledermaus (3301 comments posted) 27th March 2008
Recently read an article about a certain get that expected to get picked up by car every day. Funny animals. 
 
Nicely written story. Cattitude, LOL :grin

Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 28th March 2008
Enjoyed this, Veronica. Like Jane, I was a little unsure of the style to start, but t soon 'felt' natural. A good flow to a good short tale. 
 
Phil

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