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When Your Secret Heart Cracks
By spiderbaby49
29 March 2005

Just choosing a few of my own favourites to share with you. Constructive crits welcome.

spidey


You who are lightness and smiles
      poet.
All trills and thrills and fancy.
I'll plunge my hand into your soul
      poet.
I will draw out your life,
rip out your rhyme and reason
and when your secret heart cracks
to reveal the inside out of you
      poet,
I will eat your words.

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Yes
Written by Songster (52 comments posted) 4th April 2005
Yes, I can empathise with this but, I'm sory to say, sometimes I am the poet you're criticising.

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