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A Simple Question
By Canadian_Bacon
24 March 2008

Basically this poem is about the impossible search for answers that seem simple. It was inspired partially by the song "Your Time Has Come", by Audioslave, and was written with (the memory of) my uncle in mind.


A Simple Question

Mike Shaw


 

I’ve pressed my face into a pillow,

And dreamed the world away.

I’ve met the sun’s all-knowing gaze,

But it forced my gaze away.

 

I’ve wandered backwards for a day,

To see what I’ve been missing.

I’ve prodded a cat for answers,

At the risk of bites and hissing.

 

I’ve ascended the Eiffel Tower,

But the city held no clues.

I’ve snorkelled vibrant coral reefs,

To awaken my inner muse.

 

I’ve seen so very much on this quest,

Yet learned so very little.

I’ve still not answered my burning question;

Why is life so brittle?

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Written by Robru (219 comments posted) 24th March 2008
Welcome to the eternal quest for the reply to the unanswerable question. Just enjoy the journey.
Indeed
Written by Canadian_Bacon (110 comments posted) 24th March 2008
The journey's taken me to some pretty interesting places so far. I really have been up the Eiffel tower and swam over coral. I've been to quite a few other countries as well. The next stop on my journey will be university. We'll see how that goes. Who knows, maybe I'll learn something :p

Written by xo_theloser_ox (16 comments posted) 31st May 2008
I would like to travel, but not because I want to find the answer to that question. Thats a quest for the mind only. If the answers there or not, i'm not sure. 
 
Good work though, nice flow.

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