Working at home ...
The ergonomic training, that does it.
Feet on the floor, thighs at ninety degrees.
Five footed chair that swivels and adjusts.
Keyboard on the desk at elbow height.
Screen at right angles to the source of light.
The copyholder in my line of sight.
How totally correct and neat. But I
jettisoned my standard keyboard for one
that permits a graphics pad to sit small
in place of the function keys and numbers,
to sketch instead of draughting, and to mock
reality. Check the e-mail, search all
depths of the thesaurus (and is that word
Paleolithic? or perhaps I mean
Carboniferous? I could spend an hour
researching.) I don’t want functions, numbers,
forms with references, letters that say
in final settlement; the claim is closed,
more forms referenced in a childish scrawl
demanding demanding illogically
repeated information. There’s more sense
in the slight flutterings of the winter hedge
outside the office window. The pale stoat
fat-furred in the snow, I know him without
trying. He has no number. Sinuous
he slips over the wall, along the verge,
back over the wall silently and gone.
The small birds, finches, robins, sit
fluffed on the brilliant branches as ice
melts under sunshine into glittering drops.
They come and go, all self responsible,
making no demands on my attention,
existing in the corner of my eye.
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Written by Veronica_Milvus (626 comments posted) 24th March 2008 |
Ah, the days when the thesaurus roamed the earth, looking for smaller meanings to devour! A great idea. A lovely poem about being distracted. I can picture your office, and with views of the Lake District, it must be hard to concentrate on writing! |
Easy... Written by patterjack (1193 comments posted) 24th March 2008 |
... blank verse covering a wide range. You use your own placements of the caesura well and vary your metrical feet neatly. But as I have said before -- who the hell cares about the absolute precision of iambics !!! Gimme the variations every time ! Anything to avoid tumpty tum! The width of range of the content allows the contrasts -- the sinuosity as against the rigidity , the freedom as against that restraint which is to be found even in the pedantic exactitude and formal officialese ,including the caesura , of in final settlement; the claim is closed, Form and content come together . It may not be world shattering nature poetry but it does express in easy verse the appreciation anent its content ( the main point after all ! ) patterjack
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Wow Written by mia_ms_kim (1017 comments posted) 24th March 2008 |
I could first see the office, then the person's posture, then his/her attitude, then into his/her mind, then the world outside through his/her peripheral vision. How effortlessly I was taken into one ordinary day of the poet! Mia |
Cool! Written by beatricelouise (215 comments posted) 24th March 2008 |
Well done, my friend. You do have a way with words. Your descriptiions are effortless. Good for your! Liked the title. |
at the risk Written by fellpony (1608 comments posted) 25th March 2008 |
| ... of terrifying you, I looked at the file stats for this piece today and see it was written in 45 minutes. That's what comes of being bored with that Leonarda di Caprio film last night. |
oops Written by fellpony (1608 comments posted) 25th March 2008 |
| that should read LeonardO di Caprio - I was not implying he's anything but male! |
Written by Josie (2785 comments posted) 25th March 2008 |
| Sue, you are quite quite right about the natural world. But deportment at the keyboard and back support, plus having your feet flat on the floor are so important. I used to teach typing, and the first thing I taught was to check that wrists are slightly lowered and elbows to waist. The wrists should not be creased at all when your elbows touch your waist. Also, feet flat on floor etc, and especially, if you are copying from something, use a holder for the copy so that your head is kept up, not down on the desk with neck bent. I can tell you that these things are very very important, especially if you are at the keyboard for any length of time. But the birds from the window, the new growth on the trees, the bit of sunshine hitting the water of the lake - - - oh God. Thank you for these. |
Written by margarita (30 comments posted) 25th March 2008 |
| absolutely excellent, the harsh wit playing off the soft, warm final images are gorgeous...very apt! |
Written by fellpony (1608 comments posted) 25th March 2008 |
I too teach computing students - and I always have to remind the boys (they're nearly all boys) that while at nineteen posture means nothing to them, at forty they'll be thankful I taught them how to sit at their machines. It's very interesting to find how my readers here are reading concrete things into the final section that I have not in fact described  |
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