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A woman scorned (pt 3)
By Fledermaus
25 March 2008

Back in Leinster, Congal and his other foster brother, Donn, hailed Máel and took him to his father's hall, where a great welcome was prepared. That nigh his stepmother's lady in waiting slept with him as she had done before, and she did not speak of her mistress.

After a week though, she brought up the subject again and it was as if nothing had changed. Echaid's daughter still desired Máel, and she was more persistent than ever...

--

" Let's end this once and for all!", Congal cried.

" How?"

" Leave it to me."

" What do you have in mind?"

" I will arrange a tryst between the two of you."

" You will do what? That's the very thing we are trying to avoid. It would bring shame upon the entire clan."

" It will not. The only one who shall be ashamed is Echaid's daughter, for I'll make it clear to her that there is no chance she will ever have you. Tell your beloved to say to her mistress you'll await her near Aife's Cows tomorrow evening. All you'll have to do is to go out hunting. Tomorrow your problem will be solved."

--

She was humming happily as she put the golden bangles around her wrists.

" How do I look?"

" Gorgeous my lady."

" You aren't jealous that you'll have to share him are you?"

" Not at all, my lady."

" Without me you wouldn't have slept with him anyhow. At last he yields. At last he's mine."

She draped a richly emroidered cloak over her shoulders and fastened it with a brooch of the purest red gold. Then she opened the door and stept out into the cold. At last Máel had made up his mind. Surely he understood that she fitted better with a young prince than an old king?

A fierce wind blew into her face and she shivered, but it was worth braving such weather if that would be the road towards Máel's bed...

She saw someone on the road and for an instant she wondered if it was Máel who came to meet her, but then she saw it was Congal.

" Go back, woman!", he cried.

" Don't mingle in this, Congal. It's between me and Máel."

" It is not. Go back, I tell you."

" Step aside."

" No."

She tried to walk past him, but she felt how the warrior's strong hand closed around her arm.

" Let me go."

" Máel does not want you."

" How do you know what Máel want?"

She tried to wriggle out of his grip, but the more she struggled, the tighter he held her.

" You're hurting me."

" I'll bring you back to your husband,where you belong."

It was no use for a frail woman to fight a man like Congal. He dragged her back to the king's hall and banged the door.

The lady in waiting stared at them with a frightened look as Congal pushed Echaid's daughter inside.

" Brute", she cried and her face was red with anger.

" I hope you got the message?"

--

" Is he gone?"

The lady in waiting nodded.

" I can't see him."

" Very well then. I'll tell Máel what sort of a man his dear Congal is. He treats women as if they are cattle."

" Yes my lady. He's very rude."

" Now let's try again."

Again Echaid's daughter stepped into the cold and set out to Aife's Cows, yet again she saw Congal blocking the way.

" I told you to go back!", he howled, " How clear should I be woman? He does not want you."

" You're a savage Congal."

" If you won't go back I'll show you how savage I can be"

" You won't dare. I am the queen of Leinster..."

" So you are?"

Congal took his riding whip from his belt and held it up in a threatening gesture.

" You wouldn't hit a woman, let alone your queen."

" You are not my queen, foolish girl! Go back!"

" And you are not a warrior!"

" That's it!"

Before she could react, a fierce pain burned on the side of her head. He had hit her! Congal had hit her. She was furious and wanted to cast herself upon him, but another blow of his whip made her stagger back.

" Have you learned your lesson, queen? Máel does not want you. He can't reject you because of his honour, but I can."

" Máel...", she stammered," Máel knows you are here?"

" Sort of... It's none of your business woman. Go back to your husband and leave Máel alone."

She looked at him and muttered a curse.

" What did you say woman?"

" That you shall bleed tonight."

" Spare me your empty threats."

Reviews

Written by mia_ms_kim (891 comments posted) 25th March 2008
What palace intrigue! I'm sure similar tales exists in many cultures. But what is shocking is that the queen's father actually gave his daughter to the old king so she could have access to the king's young son. Talk about dysfunctional families! 
 
I guess more story is to follow soon? 
 
Mia ;)

Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 25th March 2008
Thanks Mia. Oh yes, compared to this Charles and Diana are very nice to each other. More will come, perhaps today, else certainly before the end of the week. 
 
I had once written a paper about this story, for it seems that although the characters act in rather strange ways according to today's values, they do what is expected from them seen in a Medieval Ireland, where honour was the only thing that mattered...
Hi Fledermaus
Written by jean.day (2190 comments posted) 26th March 2008
Another interesting chapter in your tale. I will catch up with again when I am back from holiday.

Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 26th March 2008
Thank you Jean. The last chapter is on. It's not a happy end though...

Written by bluecity (310 comments posted) 26th March 2008
Still following this! I MUST read the next one! 
 
Rosemary

Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 27th March 2008
Thanks Rosemary.

Written by beatricelouise (202 comments posted) 29th March 2008
My goodness! This tale is intriguing and rather a ghastly one at that! On to chapter four! :upset :grin

Written by Lizzy (781 comments posted) 30th March 2008
I have to find out how it ends. Tears before bedtime no doubt! 
Lizzy

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