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The Fate of Mattie's Essay - The Red Devils - Chapter 40 THE END
By jean.day
26 March 2008
I wanted to get all this posted today, as we are off on holiday tomorow.

Chapter 40

VII. Summary and Conclusions

When I started to write this essay, I didn’t know much about General Custer. I knew that my father had liked him, and had counted him as a friend. I knew that many people felt that he had let the army down by his conduct during the final battle, and yet many others claimed that he was a hero who had bad luck on the day.

I learned an enormous amount by doing this project. I learned that George Custer was many men - and that he was a very complex person.

I learned that the Indians had a very just cause for complaint against the American government in general, but also against General Custer and his brother in particular.

They had been forced from their lands time after time. Treaty after treaty with the white government had been broken by the whites. Their main source of food, the buffalo was disappearing from the face of the earth, by the greed and stupidity of men like General Custer who thought that indiscriminately killing buffalo was a good sport. And then the straw that broke the camel’s back, as they say, was the government reneging on allowing the Indians in their allotted land, 250,000 acres promised them for free range – including the sacred Black Hills land - for a very greedy white reason - gold had been found there.

I learned by my research that the battle of the Little Big Horn was much more complicated than I had thought. There were all sorts of things that could have changed the course of history if only they had been done at the time.

But history has written, and the deed is done. The Indians are no longer a threat to the country, but they are not happy in their new enforced imprisonment on reservations. There will probably never be another Indian war. But it is fitting, from my point of view, that the Indians won this one.

I’m sorry for the loss of life on both sides, but I am pleased that the Indians had something to be proud of - something that had my father lived, I would have hoped he would have felt was worth writing about.

I do wish I had met General Custer. He seemed to be a likeable man by Indians as well as his soldiers. I think he was foolish in some of his actions, and careless of the lives of others, but I think he thought he was in the right, but, in the end, his luck ran out. 

THE END
 



April 26

Miss Marble reminded us that we must hand in our projects next Monday. A huge groan went up from the class. I have finished mine, and am writing every spare moment I have to make a second copy to send off to Mr. Hudson. It worked out at many more than 10,000 words, but, of course, the Indian stories, which I was obliged to copy verbatim, were very long and added perhaps another several thousand on their own. But I thought it was worth having at least two of them in their entirety.

I had wished I could use more of Mrs. Custer’s work too, but it didn’t really do much to advance my paper. I enjoyed reading it, and found her stories about their life very fascinating. But it was pretty much irrelevant in terms of my theory - that in fact the Indians were perfectly justified in what they did.

May 3rd

Well, all of us except Nelson handed in our work today. And he promised that it would be in by tomorrow. I just managed to get my second copy done on time, and sent the original one off to Mr. Hudson. What a lot of postage I had to pay for it. It was 50 pages long. I can’t wait to hear what he thinks of it. And Miss Marble has promised that she will read our essays and judge the winner by the 18th, which will be our last day of English class. We graduate on the 21st.

But before that we have the excitement of going to the circus this afternoon. All seven of us decided to go together in a group, and the others are calling around at our house to pick us up at 1.30. The complimentary seats that Mr. Barnum gave us are very good ones  as they are fairly high up but central, so we will have a good view. We plan to go to the exhibits after the main big tent show, and take in as many as we can until dusk.

May 12th

I should be waxing lyrical about the circus today, but I can’t even think straight. I had a letter from Mr. Hudson this morning.

May 11, 1880

Dear Miss Kellogg,

Thank you very much for your essay, which I have read thoroughly, and I must congratulate you on a splendid piece of work. You obviously put many hours of time and effort into writing it and your style of writing is to be commended.

After discussing the situation with my editorial board, we have decided that we cannot publish this essay in our paper. It was felt that it was too much from the point of the view of the Indians - and would incense our readership, who are for the most part, strong and firm in their trust in the American system. You did not mince your words when you stated that you felt that the government had caused the Indian problems then, and were still contributing to them now. I am afraid that I cannot put that forward under our banner, which would be tantamount to saying that we appreciate that point of view.
However, I would wish to offer you an alternative. I could take some of the information you gleaned about your father’s life, and print that as a separate article. It would be billed as the journalist daughter of the brave journalist who was killed at the Little Bighorn. Your father was very staunch in his views in regard to General Custer and the rightness of the cause and that is the impression our newspaper would want to give.

I also was very wary of the opinion of Mrs. Libby Custer, who is a good friend of my wife. She is in the process of writing a book about her husband, and I am sure she would view your opinions on her husband as the greatest treachery, especially since she says she sent you several letters, which I am sure were full of nothing but praise for the General.

I will not do anything until I hear from you. If you do not wish anything printed, I will return your essay to you. If you wish us to take out the bits about your father, edit them,  and put them together to make the article, we will do so, happily, and under your name.

I hope you are not too disappointed, but I’m sure you will find out, if you continue in your journalist career, that there will be many more rejections than acceptances of your work. Publishing is a business after all, and we have to look after our readership.

I so much enjoyed meeting you and your sister, and am glad you say that you valued your visit to see us in our wonderful city.
Yours faithfully,

Fredrick Hudson,

Editor of New York Herald

I showed the letter to Cora Sue as soon as I had read it, with tears streaming down my cheeks. She put her arm around me, and said she understood how I felt, but she thought that under the circumstances, I should not be upset. What I was getting, was what I had originally wanted - a story about Pa. She reminded me that I had never wanted to write about Custer or the Indians - other than to include them as part of the story about Pa.

I need to think this whole thing through, and will not reply to Mr. Hudson just yet. I think I will wait until after Miss Marble reads my essay. I might, in fact, win the school prize and get my work published in our local paper. I would prefer my whole article even in an inferior paper, to a foreshortened version of it, taken out of context, in a superior one.

We did enjoy the circus. Thank goodness the letter didn’t come on Saturday morning, or I wouldn’t have been able to go.

18th May

We were handed back our essays today, and Miss Marble was very pleased to announce the winner - Nelson Nickerson. Why am I not surprised? His father paid for him to get his extra special Lincoln research done - and he probably bribed Miss Marble to choose his story. I know I am bitter. I know that I am a better writer than he is. I know that I put more effort into my project than he did - he probably hired a ghost writer too.

Then after school, as we were filing out, Miss Marble said, “Oh, Mattie, can I have a word with you, please.” And when Cora Sue hung behind to wait, she added, “in private, please.”

So Cora Sue said she would wait for me outside. Everyone was rushing around Nelson, congratulating him, and wanting to know when his essay would be in the local paper.

“Sit down, please Mattie.”

I sat.

“You have been very sullen and unresponsive these last few weeks in class. Is anything the matter?”

“No,” I said shortly.

“Are you upset that you didn’t win the prize?”

“Yes, in a way I am,” I said, “but I suppose I should have expected it.”

“Are you implying that you think I judged it unfairly?”

“No, not exactly, but I am a better writer than he is. In fact, I am the best writer in this class, and I know it, and I think you know it too.”

“You are indeed a gifted writer, and I have admired your work over the years. But Mattie, I could not believe it when I read your essay. Your father would be so ashamed of you! Those things you wrote about the desecration of the bodies after the massacre. I could hardly bear to read it. And you implied that General Custer was unfaithful to his much beloved wife with an Indian Squaw. Really! How could you even have thought that I would have chosen your work knowing that the winning project was to be published. I really wonder if you understand how very disloyal to the American way of life your essay reads. I am doing you a favor by not choosing it, and I suggest you throw it away as soon as I return it.”

By this time I was crying freely, and couldn’t think of anything to say to rebutt her unkindness.

She softened and tried to put her arm around me but I shrugged her off, and grabbing my essay, I marched out of the room.

“Martha. You are being very rude. Martha, do you hear me?”

Oh, I heard her all right. But I kept on going. At least she had given me a B on my project, so I wouldn’t be failing the year and not be able to graduate. I suppose I should be grateful for that.

Cora Sue realised as soon as she saw me that my interview had not gone well. She didn’t say anything but just hugged me while I cried as if I couldn’t stop.

“I got a B on my essay,” she added when I finally calmed down.

“So did I,” I said.

“Goodness, the way you were carrying on, I thought she had failed you!”

“She said a lot of things about how Pa would be ashamed of me for the things I said. It would have been easier to have taken a bad grade than have her say that.”

“Pa was a journalist, and he would have been proud of the way you wrote your story, even if he might not have agreed with all the things you said. People who write against the accepted point of view are never going to be popular writers. People like to read things that make them feel good, and things that don’t make them think too deeply or question their accepted point of view. Mrs. Custer’s stories are sweet and soft and gentle and loving. Her work will be well received. But your story is the one that, in years to come, if people read it, they might well then be able to accept that yours was the truth, and hers the dream.”

She stopped then, and remembering that I still had not replied to Mr Hudson, she asked, “Will you let Mr. Hudson publish the bits of your story about Pa?”

“No,” I said. “I will write and say thank you but no thanks. He would edit it so that it would no longer seem like my work. One day, perhaps, I will write a story, or maybe even a whole book about Pa. But the story I sent to Mr. Hudson was not for that purpose, and therefore, I will ask him to return it and will not have him publish it.”

“But who knows. If he did publish it, you might become famous yourself, and maybe even get a job out of it?”

“Well, we will never know, will we? I have made up my mind. And all that work I did was not in vain. I learned ever so much from my research. And I value the visit to New York and the articles we read. I enjoyed corresponding with Libbie Custer. And I suppose, in a way, it has brought me closer to Pa. I hardly knew him at all. And because of this project, I feel that I do know him, and wish with all my heart that I could meet him again, and discuss with him what this whole thing was about.”

“Do you know what I would like to do, Mattie?”

“No, what.”
 
“I would like to take some of our money from Mr. Bennett and go on a sort of pilgrimage to see all those places Pa worked in and talked about. I want to see Bismarck, and Fort Abraham Lincoln, and especially the Bad Lands. He did so love those Bad Lands.”

“Yes,” I agreed, “and we could go on the same route as he went, but on the train now, and when we get to the right part of Montana, we could go and see where he died, and see that pretty view he talked of in his last paper of his last report - the one he wanted so much to do a sketch of. We could do a sketch of it for him.”

“Let’s stop by Craves ice cream parlour on the way home.”

“It’s not on the way home.”

“Well, it isn’t far out of the way.”

“Okay, then. I’ll have a tutti fruit, like the Hudsons did in New York.”

“I am going to be faithful to Maple Nut. I don’t think you can get anything better.”
 


April 26

Miss Marble reminded us that we must hand in our projects next Monday. A huge groan went up from the class. I have finished mine, and am writing every spare moment I have to make a second copy to send off to Mr. Hudson. It worked out at many more than 10,000 words, but, of course, the Indian stories, which I was obliged to copy verbatim, were very long and added perhaps another several thousand on their own. But I thought it was worth having at least two of them in their entirety.

I had wished I could use more of Mrs. Custer’s work too, but it didn’t really do much to advance my paper. I enjoyed reading it, and found her stories about their life very fascinating. But it was pretty much irrelevant in terms of my theory - that in fact the Indians were perfectly justified in what they did.

May 3rd

Well, all of us except Nelson handed in our work today. And he promised that it would be in by tomorrow. I just managed to get my second copy done on time, and sent the original one off to Mr. Hudson. What a lot of postage I had to pay for it. It was 50 pages long. I can’t wait to hear what he thinks of it. And Miss Marble has promised that she will read our essays and judge the winner by the 18th, which will be our last day of English class. We graduate on the 21st.

But before that we have the excitement of going to the circus this afternoon. All seven of us decided to go together in a group, and the others are calling around at our house to pick us up at 1.30. The complimentary seats that Mr. Barnum gave us are very good ones  as they are fairly high up but central, so we will have a good view. We plan to go to the exhibits after the main big tent show, and take in as many as we can until dusk.

May 12th

I should be waxing lyrical about the circus today, but I can’t even think straight. I had a letter from Mr. Hudson this morning.

May 11, 1880



Dear Miss Kellogg,

Thank you very much for your essay, which I have read thoroughly, and I must congratulate you on a splendid piece of work. You obviously put many hours of time and effort into writing it and your style of writing is to be commended.

After discussing the situation with my editorial board, we have decided that we cannot publish this essay in our paper. It was felt that it was too much from the point of the view of the Indians -and would incense our readership, who are for the most part, strong and firm in their trust in the American system. You did not mince your words when you stated that you felt that the government had caused the Indian problems then, and were still contributing to them now. I am afraid that I cannot put that forward under our banner, which would be tantamount to saying that we appreciate that point of view.

However, I would wish to offer you an alternative. I could take some of the information you gleaned about your father’s life, and print that as a separate article. It would be billed as the journalist daughter of the brave journalist who was killed at the Little Bighorn. Your father was very staunch in his views in regard to General Custer and the rightness of the cause and that is the impression our newspaper would want to give.

I also was very wary of the opinion of Mrs. Libby Custer, who is a good friend of my wife. She is in the process of writing a book about her husband, and I am sure she would view your opinions on her husband as the greatest treachery, especially since she says she sent you several letters, which I am sure were full of nothing but praise for the General.

I will not do anything until I hear from you. If you do not wish anything printed, I will return your essay to you. If you wish us to take out the bits about your father, edit them,  and put them together to make the article, we will do so, happily, and under your name.

I hope you are not too disappointed, but I’m sure you will find out, if you continue in your journalist career, that there will be many more rejections than acceptances of your work. Publishing is a business after all, and we have to look after our readership.

I so much enjoyed meeting you and your sister, and am glad you say that you valued your visit to see us in our wonderful city.

Yours faithfully,

Fredrick Hudson,

Editor of New York Herald

I showed the letter to Cora Sue as soon as I had read it, with tears streaming down my cheeks. She put her arm around me, and said she understood how I felt, but she thought that under the circumstances, I should not be upset. What I was getting, was what I had originally wanted - a story about Pa. She reminded me that I had never wanted to write about Custer or the Indians - other than to include them as part of the story about Pa.

I need to think this whole thing through, and will not reply to Mr. Hudson just yet. I think I will wait until after Miss Marble reads my essay. I might, in fact, win the school prize and get my work published in our local paper. I would prefer my whole article even in an inferior paper, to a foreshortened version of it, taken out of context, in a superior one.

We did enjoy the circus. Thank goodness the letter didn’t come on Saturday morning, or I wouldn’t have been able to go.

18th May

We were handed back our essays today, and Miss Marble was very pleased to announce the winner - Nelson Nickerson. Why am I not surprised? His father paid for him to get his extra special Lincoln research done - and he probably bribed Miss Marble to choose his story. I know I am bitter. I know that I am a better writer than he is. I know that I put more effort into my project than he did - he probably hired a ghost writer too.

Then after school, as we were filing out, Miss Marble said, “Oh, Mattie, can I have a word with you, please.” And when Cora Sue hung behind to wait, she added, “in private, please.”

So Cora Sue said she would wait for me outside. Everyone was rushing around Nelson, congratulating him, and wanting to know when his essay would be in the local paper.

“Sit down, please Mattie.”

I sat.

“You have been very sullen and unresponsive these last few weeks in class. Is anything the matter?”

“No,” I said shortly.

“Are you upset that you didn’t win the prize?”

“Yes, in a way I am,” I said, “but I suppose I should have expected it.”

“Are you implying that you think I judged it unfairly?”

“No, not exactly, but I am a better writer than he is. In fact, I am the best writer in this class, and I know it, and I think you know it too.”

“You are indeed a gifted writer, and I have admired your work over the years. But Mattie, I could not believe it when I read your essay. Your father would be so ashamed of you! Those things you wrote about the desecration of the bodies after the massacre. I could hardly bear to read it. And you implied that General Custer was unfaithful to his much beloved wife with an Indian Squaw. Really! How could you even have thought that I would have chosen your work knowing that the winning project was to be published? I really wonder if you understand how very disloyal to the American way of life your essay reads. I am doing you a favor by not choosing it, and I suggest you throw it away.”

By this time I was crying freely, and couldn’t think of anything to say to rebutt her unkindness.

She softened and tried to put her arm around me but I shrugged her off, and grabbing my essay, I marched out of the room.

“Martha. You are being very rude. Martha, do you hear me?”

Oh, I heard her all right. But I kept on going. At least she had given me a B on my project, so I wouldn’t be failing the year and not be able to graduate. I suppose I should be grateful for that.

Cora Sue realised as soon as she saw me that my interview had not gone well. She didn’t say anything but just hugged me while I cried as if I couldn’t stop.

“I got a B on my essay,” she added when I finally calmed down.

“So did I,” I said.

“Goodness, the way you were carrying on, I thought she had failed you!”

“She said a lot of things about how Pa would be ashamed of me for the things I said. It would have been easier to have taken a bad grade that have her say that.”

“Pa was a journalist, and he would have been proud of the way you wrote your story, even if he might not have agreed with all the things you said. People who write against the accepted point of view are never going to be popular writers. People like to read things that make them feel good, and things that don’t make them think too deeply or question their accepted point of view. Mrs. Custer’s stories are sweet and soft and gentle and loving. Her work will be well received. But your story is the one that, in years to come, if people read it, they might well then be able to accept that yours was the truth, and hers the dream.”

She stopped then, and remembering that I still had not replied to Mr Hudson, she asked, “Will you let Mr. Hudson publish the bits of your story about Pa?”

“No,” I said. “I will write and say thank you but no thanks. He would edit it so that it would no longer seem like my work. One day, perhaps, I will write a story, or maybe even a whole book about Pa. But the story I sent to Mr. Hudson was not for that purpose, and therefore, I will ask him to return it and will not have him publish it.”
“But who knows. If he did publish it, you might become famous yourself, and maybe even get a job out of it?”
“Well, we will never know, will we? I have made up my mind. And all that work I did was not in vain. I learned ever so much from my research. And I value the visit to New York and the articles we read. I enjoyed corresponding with Libbie Custer. And I suppose, in a way, it has brought me closer to Pa. I hardly knew him at all. And because of this project, I feel that I do know him, and wish with all my heart that I could meet him again, and discuss with him what this whole thing was about.”

“Do you know what I would like to do, Mattie?”

“No, what.”
 
“I would like to take some of our money from Mr. Bennett and go on a sort of pilgrimage to see all those places Pa worked in and talked about. I want to see Bismarck, and Fort Abraham Lincoln, and especially the Bad Lands. He did so love those Bad Lands.”

“Yes,” I agreed, “and we could go on the same route as he went, but on the train now, and when we get to the right part of Montana, we could go and see where he died, and see that pretty view he talked of in his last paper of his last report - the one he wanted so much to do a sketch of. We could do a sketch of it for him.”

“Let’s stop by Craves Ice Cream Parlour on the way home.”

“It’s not on the way home.”

“Well, it isn’t far out of the way.”

“Okay, then. I’ll have a tutti fruit, like the Hudsons did in New York.”

“I am going to be faithful to Maple Nut. I don’t think you can get anything better.”
 


EPILOGUE

William and Lillie Disbrow (Aunt Lillie)

Unfortunately, the 1890 census report does not exist for most of the US including Connecticut. But they are mentioned in 1900, when Lillie is 53 and William is 56. They have 3 children, Charles born 1881, Lillie E, born 1883 and Ellen (Helen J) born 1886. They also had two lodgers living in the house. Unfortunately the USA death statistics don’t really start with any accuracy until the next decade. In 1910, all the children are still living with Lillie, but William has died. They have a lodger and a servant. In 1920, Lily J is still alive, aged 85, with her son Charles and daughter Lily living with her.

 

Hannah Robinson  (Grandma)

Hannah continued to be listed in the Bridgeport city directory until 1891. She died on March 21, 1891 and is buried at Bridgeport's Mountain Grove Cometary

Hannah Robinson, aged 58 in 1863

Mattie Grace Kellogg

Mattie became a professional musician and by 1885 her name began appearing in the Bridgeport City Directory as an artist. In 1892  she is listed as a music teacher. On December 28, 1892, Mattie, aged 29, married Dr. Franklin S. Temple, aged 25, from New York. He had recently graduated from Albany Medical College of Union University, Albany, New York. September 12, 1893, their son was born in Boston, and called Franklin Lyman Temple.

On the 1910 census, Franklin S Temple, and Mattie Y (should be G) and Frank L, (aged 16) are listed as living in Lowell Ward 9, Middlesex, Massachusetts. His widowed mother, Katharine A, Temple, aged 64, is living with them.

On June 1, 1917, Mattie died at the age of 52 of nephritis in Lowell, Massachusettes. She was buried next to her grandmther in Bridgeport in unmarked graves. Nearby are large monuments over the graves of showman P.T. Barnum and Tom Thumb.
On the 1920 census, Franklin a widower, lodges in Boston. He lived until December 7, 1956, when he died at the age of 90 in Derry, New Hampshire.

On the 1930 census, Frank L Temple, Mattie's son, is listed as having a wife, Elizabeth, and a daughter Winifred V, aged 10, born, 1920.  They were married in 1918, and his wife was Elizabeth L.J. Bamberger. Their daughter, was born in February, 1920. Winifred, who was a resource for the book, I Go With Custer, recalls her mother saying, “Mattie was the nicest person. There was not a woman on earth better than Mattie.”  Frank died in 1962.

Winifred Temple Steward married Walter George Balch in 1942 and had two sons, Richard S Balch, and Ronald L Balch. Ronald's daughters are Stefanie and Jennifer, who are Mark Kellogg's great-great-great-grandaughters. Apparently the family did not realize that they were related to Mark Kellogg of Little Big Horn fame until the man who wrote the book interviewed them. Richard Balch wrote, “Our kinship with Mark Kellogg came as a surprise to us. I had known that my great-grandmother Mattie, Grace, was a Kellogg, but that was as much as I knew about her family.” Winifred married Dr. A.L. David Steward in 1972.


Cora Sue Kellogg

Cora Sue was not listed individually in the Bridgeport City Directory, so after 1885, she may have moved to live with Kellogg relatives in Denver by then. She worked as a dental assistant in Denver from 1893 to 1900. She, aged 37, married Edward Allison Elray, aged 52, a mining engineer from Cincinnati, Ohio. He had been married previously and had a daughter.  Cora apparently lived in Salt Lake City, Utah, from 1903 until her death on December 6, 1938. She apparently maintained her ties with her sister's son back in Massachusetts. Winfred Steward recalls that her father and Cora corresponded, but she had none of their letters. She remembered hearing that Cora ran a silver mine after her husband died in 1918. Vaughn stated that Cora lived at the Plandome Hotel in Salt Lake City for the last 20 years of her life and may have worked there as a desk clerk.

John Dunn and his wife Christina, were the people in Bismarck who were given Mark Kellogg's possessions. In 1880, they are in the census with John being 40, and the children are Cassius, 12, Fannie, 6, and Jack, 2. Mr. Dunn, as well as being a druggist (chemist) was a Burleigh County Commissioner. Kellogg's possessions that they later turned over to the North Dakota Historical Society in 1918, included a black leather satchel, continuing a blue woolen shirt, wool socks, cotton underwear, mosquito netting to drape his head and face, reading glasses, pencil, combs, tobacco and flint, and his journal. Along the way he collected some rocks that appealed to his interest in geography. When Custer split his cavalry from the main command, Kellogg left his satchel behind on the Far West riverboat. Fannie Dunn gave his journal to the Bismarck Tribune, and later the Tribune donated it to the North Dakota State Historical Society.

I have not tried to trace the people who I used as classmates or teachers for them, as they were not important to the story.

P.T. Barnum died on April 7, 1891, at home in Bridgeport. He kept working with the circus most of those in between years, and it combined with nearly all the other circus’ in existence. He arranged for the paper to print his obituary before he died, so he could read it.

James Gordon Bennett - He married at the age of 73 to the Baroness de Reuter, daughter of Paul Reuter, founder of Reuters news agency. He died on May 14, 1918 in Beaulieu-sur-Mer, Alpes-Maritimes, France.

Mrs. Elizabeth Bacon Custer - died on April 4, 1933 at the age of 99, having successfully published three books about her life with General Custer.

Mark Twain died on April 21, 1910.

Harriet Beecher Stowe died on July 1, 1896.
 
ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS

I am indebted to Sandy Barnard's book, I go with Custer for the information on Mark Kellogg and his family.

Also the book Boots and Saddles by Libbie Custer added considerably to what I could find out about the subject on the wedsite.

REFERENCES:

I Go With Custer, The Llife and Death of Reporter Mark Kellogg, by Sandy Barnard, published by the Bismarck Tribune, 1996.
The Bismarck Tribune front page for July 5, 1876.
Boots and Saddles, by Elizabeth Bacon Custer, published 1885.
Lincoln, Gore Vidal, 1984, Random House.
The Last Years of Sitting Bull, North Dakota Heritage Center, State Historical Society of North Dakota.
Flat boating on the Yellowstone, 1877, Fred G. Bond, p. 171-205.
Pioneer Woman’s Journal, Joanna L Stratton, Touchstone, 1981
Last of the Great Scouts, by Helen Cody Westmore
Thomas, Agnes, “That's Not in my American History Book, Taylor Trade Publications, 2000 about Mary Lincoln Todd and General Custer.
Custer, Jeffrey D West, Touchstone 1996.
Thwaites, Journal of Lewis and Clark, 1904,
Schwarty J.W. Bird Woman, 1918
Lewis and Clark, by Leslie Mansfield, Celestial Arts 2002
Mark Twain Speaks for Himself, Paul Fatout, Purdue, 1978
The Wit and Wisdom of Mark Twain, by Alex Ayres, 1987
Charles Dickens by G.K. Chesterton
Encyclopedia of Frontier Biography, May 31, p 766
J. W. Baugh , The Mark H Kellogg Story
Custer’s Mysterious Mr. Kellogg, Mark Kellogg’s Diary, No Dak. Hist vol 17-3, July 1950

Reviews

Written by bluecity (376 comments posted) 26th March 2008
Oh dear, poor old Mattie. But it was ever thus. No-one wants to hear anything except what they have been conditioned to hear. 
 
You've got problems with formatting, I'm afraid. Maybe some boffin will fix it before you get back from holiday. Hope you are going somewhere nice. 
 
An interesting read, lots of very accurate commentary. I feel we needed a bit more about Mattie, but I sense that Mattie was not the person who interested you. 
 
Well done. 
 
Rosemary

Written by Fledermaus (3281 comments posted) 2nd April 2008
Hi Jean, I do want to read this last chapter, but the formatting makes it very hard :sigh

Written by Fledermaus (3281 comments posted) 6th April 2008
Hi Jean. I was waiting for you to change the layout, for it is as Rosemary says. Yet, since I had to find out how it ends, I have read it after all. A bit mean that they had not told Mattie earlier what they expected of her. What's very nice is how you managed to get different styles in your piece, as if the pieces are really written by different people. Somehow I still think the battle doesn't sound as epic as I had once imagined it, but that's probably because your story is closer to the truth than the Little Bighorn of my imagination, as I knew very little about that part of history. 
 
A very educational piece of writing!

Written by Phil (6719 comments posted) 17th August 2008
Jean, I'd love to read this, but it's all shooting off the side of the screen. Perhaps you could sort it and then I can read. 
 
Thanks. 
 
Phil
Thanks Phil
Written by jean.day (2279 comments posted) 18th August 2008
I have redone it, leaving off the internet references, which might have been the problem.

Written by Phil (6719 comments posted) 18th August 2008
Politics at all levels. I don't know who said it, but there's a famous quote about the victors writing history - I guess you've done your little bit to balance that. 
 
I've really enjoyed this book, Jean. I've learned a lot about something I knew very little about and from a historical perspective, I think you've been thorough and showed balance. 
 
It's a novel way to present an historical perspective like this: a semi fictionalised novel. It works well. I suppose there are times when the history takes precedent over narrative drive - but that's to be expected in a piece like this. 
 
Good stuff, Jean. As I say, thoroughly enjoyed. 
 
Phil
Thanks Phil
Written by jean.day (2279 comments posted) 18th August 2008
I am assuming because you reviewed this, that the formatting is okay now.  
 
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had fun writing it, and I learned a whole lot too, that was never taught in my American history books.

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