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Poetry
Animal Poem
By Mr_E_Writer
26 March 2008


Kids! Don't you just love them!!




Hop, said the rabbit - Hop, hop, hop
Here comes the butcher’s wife
With a mop, mop, mop
Run, said the badger - Run, run, run
Here comes old baldy butcher
With a great big gun
Chill, said the ferret - Have no care
For sad old baldy butcher’s
Only looking for hare!

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Written by fellpony (1616 comments posted) 26th March 2008
As Charles Lamb said, "Is that your own hare or is it a wig?"

Written by punchy (500 comments posted) 26th March 2008
Made me smile. How I enjoy a good snigger at a bald man! :eek

Written by Fledermaus (3301 comments posted) 26th March 2008
Very good poem. Liked it. Nice flow.

Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 26th March 2008
Haha - enjoyed. But as a developing baldy - you can all get stuffed. 
 
Phil

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