READING ROOM
Great Writing - Home
Read and review others' work
Articles on writing
Advice from the community
COMMUNITY
Talk to others in the forums
Events and Competitions
GW News
ABOUT GREAT WRITING
All About Us
Contact Us
WORK AWAITING REVIEW
GW IS...
Great Writing creative writing community is designed to prompt ideas and provide inspiration and motivation within aspiring and amateur authors. Whatever your topic; from love poetry to Doctor Who or Harry Potter fan fiction, Great Writing's online writing group is where you can make new friends and improve your creative writing.
WHO'S ONLINE
We have 1856 guests online and 10 members online
Poetry
gw & co
By wt
26 March 2008

where in your fellowship you find
room enough to quaintly consider
the night shade that in you inspires
a wayward your daily grind

but you ask not questions that beckon
the moon's silhouette surely knows
your innermost timeless projections
objections and isms and vile s

with only yourself your own image
naught but moment airy and lapse
in a collective memory forbidden
great writing and company were sat

and met by the ocean were smitten
and touched on the surface well toned
in the art of all sorts what was given
for only a moment's thought


Reviews
For a moment
Written by patterjack (1068 comments posted) 26th March 2008
i thought that this was a syllabic poem. If that was the intention it doesn't quite compute 
 
But I had a try at simply understanding the sense of ,for instance ,  
 
a wayward your daily grind 
 
and a couple of other very peculiar grammatical structures 
 
Had to give up -- the work does not communicate to me . 
 
patterjack

Written by Phil (6393 comments posted) 27th March 2008
Tried hard with this one. As above - doesn't communicate. 
 
Phil
thanks for reading
Written by wt (137 comments posted) 27th March 2008
And thanks for a a moment's thought! 
 
 
Wt

   Only registered users can rate and write comments.
   Please login or register.

Powered by AkoComment 2.0!

 Previous item   Next item