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Spring Haiku
By Josie
29 March 2008
Japanese poetry, based on syllables rather than accentuated stresses because in its original language the words are monosyllabic.  I think our own language with its stresses, lifts and falls of the words etc lends itself to more beautiful poetry.    The syllabic count is:  first line 5, second line 7 and third line 5.  Much easier to write than our own metred poetry.  See:  http://www.haiku-plus.de/englisch/haiku-e.html



                        

                         Shouting through the gales.

                         Crying to be admitted,

                         Spring is calling us.
  

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Written by NedWilson (26 comments posted) 29th March 2008
I am a fan of this kind of poetry. Very nice. Ive been trying to think of a spring haiku myself but nothing so far!

Written by Fledermaus (3238 comments posted) 29th March 2008
Does it have to cry to be admitted? I think it just comes, wether we like it or not ;) Nice poem :D

Written by Phil (6645 comments posted) 29th March 2008
I'll be crying if this rain lasts for much longer. Eighteen years I've lived here and it's still a wet November day. Will spring - or god forbid - summer, ever arrive to this corner of Lancashire? 
 
Phil
The Rain in Bolton stays mainly - - - -
Written by Josie (2732 comments posted) 29th March 2008
Ha ha ha - I knew there was one way to get Phil to review my poem. Now the rain in Lancashire stays mostly in the Bolton area. Looking forward to summer heh? Remember last June and July? My poor daffodils are blooming in their water logged beds, whilst the ducks think I've made a special swimming pool for them in the gulleys at the side of the paths. Robru - are you listening? Come and take some of this water back to Australia.

Written by Merioneth (79 comments posted) 15th April 2008
I've been calling Spring non-stop. She won't pick up the phone! Still a bit chilly here.

Written by xo_theloser_ox (16 comments posted) 9th June 2008
I like Haikus. 
I have never read one that wasn't a happy one.

Written by xo_theloser_ox (16 comments posted) 9th June 2008
I like Haikus. 
I have never read one that wasn't a happy one. :grin

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